[retaker]再戰2020既你地依家過成點?

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2020-02-15 19:38:33
我上年1(a)係咁寫:
(兩個markers都係畀2 out of 4)
The total percentage for voting the democrats and the localists slightly decreased by 1%, changing from 56% in 2012 to 55% in 2016, while the total percentage for voting the pro-establishment slightly decreased by 3%, changing from 45% in 2012 to 40% in 2016. The percentage for voting the middle ground increased by 4%, changing from 1% to 5% in 2016. While the percentage for voting the democrats just slightly changed, the proportion for voting the relatively more radical ones (including both the radical-democrats and the localists) increased by 11%, changing from a total of 15% in 2012 to 26% in 2016.
我宜家睇返覺得最大問題可能係得冇compare晒每組自己嘅改變(漏咗traditional pan-democrats, radical-democrats同localists).
另一個問題係冇界定清楚
democrats=traditional pan-democrats+radical pan-democrats.
除此之外仲有咩可以改善?
2020-02-15 19:57:01
依排係屋企計時練習做數學/M1個陣,成日都有90%左右,好驚到時考個陣做唔到
2020-02-15 19:58:41
同埋覺得自己係因為做過啲pp,記得啲step係點,到時考場冇答案check反而畏手畏腳
2020-02-15 20:16:28
咁你平時都係做完最後先check啫,suppose maths記得都無所謂,因為你第一次做係識架
2020-02-15 20:26:22
2020-02-15 20:27:40
sor係咪依張,見啲 data好唔同
2020-02-15 20:31:53
係呢個
英文版佢分別係寫
Pro- establishment
traditional pan-democrats
radical pan-democrats
localists
同middle ground
2020-02-15 20:57:59
第一你combine咗democrats 同localists嚟講,建制講到點變,你又自己分咗個middle ground嚟講,最後你又combine radical 同local講,有無一種你report到啲嘢,又有嘗試分析下,但完全唔入肉嘅感覺,所以兩分囉
2020-02-15 21:05:43
其實條題目講得好清楚,係叫你講陣營分布的變化,唔明就諗下依個key word 係乜,譬如本身我齊國係最人強馬壯,咪個陣營分布咗係我依邊,其他陣營可能得楚夠我嚟,其他全部好廢
但係十年後,我嗰邊同楚國太hea,比其他少數陣營強返唔少,雖然未至於完全失勢,不過如果本身小國嘅想合力打我都未必輸,咁依刻咪分布平均咗啲
2020-02-15 21:11:34
打咗咁大個比喻,其實係問你邊個係大佬囉,所以你分陣營覆分建制泛民係大佬,其他叫廢廢地,唔使分咁細,依個係一開始2012個勢,但係風水輪流轉,建制跌少少啫,都係唔大影響,反而係泛民跌到pk,失勢,咁個勢去咗邊,就一定係比咗本身廢柴嗰班,由16%—>31%,所以最後係似天下三分
2020-02-15 21:16:00
所以要conclude,就係用強弱分兩大佬,其他廢柴三group人,分別講依三個gp點改變之後,就個人分析返原來泛民大勢已去,建制都跌少少,局面已經唔係壟斷,而係少數派加埋有得玩埋一份,依個approach去寫咪就係個分佈,亦解釋咗點解個group係咁分,even radical同普通泛民都唔會一齊講
2020-02-15 21:19:35
又或者你真係 combine兩個泛民寫都ok,不過都好似上面分析,用中文講就係瓜分依啲term攞晒分,英文就shift to 雞雞地咁啦
2020-02-15 23:00:04
巴打覆得好詳細,真係萬分感激
原來我一直都忽略咗要比較最大同最細
一直以為淨係講最高同最低
宜家先發覺係要講swift of votes
聽完你咁講之後發現原來呢種multi-group+唔同時間而且total=100%嘅題目真係可以有好多野講
今次真係獲益良多
2020-02-15 23:01:08
*swift shift
2020-02-15 23:06:16
大家都會睇到最皮毛嗰層,你要諗多兩步先有3/4分
2020-02-15 23:08:02
其實年年份model ans都有一般人miss咗嘅point,真係要好心思縝密,仲要寫得切
2020-02-15 23:16:15
可以睇下level5 sample點寫,都有用,反正你操係好嘥氣,不如跟住勁人嘅flow同framework,訓練到自己面對新題型都可以好冷靜咁分析你要答乜,都打咗我好耐,不過入ot都算係想幫人,有緣係依到撞到,幫得就幫,都有好多前人肯分享經歷我先成功到
2020-02-15 23:46:36
真,我平時睇吓啲英文writing sample都學到唔少野
考評近年都真係出咗唔少新題型,好似18年咁有題問controversy又唔同咗
講起,我都係時候要練吓啲字速,自從入咗u之後都冇咩用筆寫過文,好驚寫唔返以前嗰種速度
真係好多謝你肯花時間解答我嘅問題
遲啲如果再有問題都想上嚟問吓
祝你成功first hon到

2020-02-15 23:58:18
又唔使first hon,有工開就夠,嗰度大把勁人,ls我唔係靠我乜心得之後跟住考有星,所以你參考下好
2020-02-16 00:06:19
祝一切順利
2020-02-16 00:37:24
咁又係,你嗰科基本上畢業就已經有人請

2020-02-16 02:07:55
做卷做到厭倦左有咩辦法快速回氣
已經試過睇片/打機消悶,反而更想頹落去
2020-02-16 04:03:07
speech and hearing?
2020-02-16 04:04:57
做第二科
同埋我會溝住啲野做 eg 做完一份paper就by topic做mc 再做paper 再by topic lq
唔好同一個格式既野對太耐
2020-02-16 08:29:41
其實都講咗飽和十年,有啲驚步speech嘅後塵,成日都話唔夠人,人口老化,需求大,咁又點啫,一句話無資源同搞咗醫生護士先,就仆直
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