【眾籌】我地出咗final draft啦!!!!

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2019-06-26 00:20:57
2019-06-26 00:20:59
辛苦晒!!
2019-06-26 00:21:01
Bankers, businessmen, tourists, and even ordinary Hongkongers could be arrested and sent to China for trials of alleged crimes and fabricated accusations. Hong Kong will cease to be a free economic zone, which has long served the world’s most prominent businesses.

journalist, Human rights activist, or anyone who stands different opinions/values
just my 2 cents
2019-06-26 00:21:24
[眾籌各地登頭版] 最新進度整合: (有個簡明版目前整理緊放左喺工作表3)
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/16IXNdIpojVFOttH_Q-4bR9qA31dPUZtNXvhB6HjP6C0/edit#gid=0
會計表:
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1ixPdJAjO2vzhV2Zlyvr6V6ub3tOOgPum_BISpNcpIuo/edit#gid=563580706

德國、日本、美國、英國、韓國、澳洲、台灣、法國、印度、西班牙、芬蘭、加拿大、愛爾蘭已經有人跟緊 其它國家巴絲可以單聲會跟,再自發跟住先(聯絡報社,報價,報位,有料再報上黎)
自發做野有料有成果想Report既可以TG: shameonhkpolice 做分流聯絡
暫時Handle曬手上既CASE先再考慮新既國家

(2344update: 日文組方面更新左日文稿, 已同步)
(0016update: 成個表格式重整左,將成舊資訊打散晒去唔同工作表,要麻煩大家click下面啲sheet 2-5)
2019-06-26 00:21:26
明白 我見上面有另一位巴打都有再改過
嗰份應該會focus啲
唔知佢將嗰份draft 俾咗tg group睇未
2019-06-26 00:21:39
we are talking nyt and wsj here...
2019-06-26 00:23:23
啲英文靚到呢
2019-06-26 00:23:31
呢張相都可以考慮?

2019-06-26 00:23:42
上面有七檸John巴打出過另一版本,小弟約略改咗少少同加咗D料,可以俾各位參考下

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The Chinese government once again showed its true colors to the world through the proposal of the Extradition Law Amendment Bill in Hong Kong, a bill that not only destroys the autonomy of Hong Kong, but also endangers all foreigners residing, visiting, or even merely transiting through this bastion of freedom and liberty. [1]

Despite millions of protesters turning out in two consecutive Sundays, and a large-scale peaceful gathering that turned violent when the Hong Kong Police Force unleashed disproportionate force on peaceful protesters, with various well-documented instances of police brutality:

1) riot police chucking tear gas grenades right at a local politician; [2]
2) shooting tear gas canisters in the middle of a cornered and panicking crowd (which almost turned into Hillsborough 2.0) [3];
3) riot police spraying an unarmed and injured man in the face with pepper spray;
4) threatening to shoot journalists; [4]

Even now, numerous protesters were unjustly arrested, with many more suffering from various degrees of injury, some of whom were too scared to go to the hospital for fear of having their personal particulars leaked to the Police unconstitutionally. [5]

The situation has since simmered down to an uneasy stalemate, with the Hong Kong SAR government (and perhaps their true masters in Beijing) steadfastly refusing our demands to i) completely withdraw the amendment bill, ii) drop all charges against the arrested protesters, and iii) promising that there will be no repercussions to all who participated in the 12th June protest outside the government headquarters. More protests have been planned in the lead-up to the G20 summit in Osaka, and enterprising netizens have even purchased ads on major newspapers around the world.

We pray that our efforts would eventually bear fruit, but even if by some miracle that the government does accede to our demands, it will not end there. The SAR government (and again, their masters in Beijing) will retaliate against this slap in their face with even more draconian measures like disqualifying lawfully elected legislators with ridiculous interpretations of the Hong Kong Basic Law (pretty much our Constitution) and digging up outdated precedents to give out harsh prison sentences to protesters [6].

Our beautiful city, our Pearl of the Orient, our Fragrant Harbor, edges ever closer to the dark valley of totalitarianism since 1997.

But we will never give up without a fight.

We will not go quietly into the night.

For better or worse, our years under British rule taught us the true worth of freedom and liberty, and the importance of a functional democracy (or at least, we’ve seen how badly can things get without one).

Join us in the fight against totalitarianism by delivering our concerns and demands to your governments in view of the upcoming G20 summit.

#LiberteHongKong
#FreeHongKong
#HongkongersAssemble
#HongKongForever

[1] “freedom” 同埋 “liberty” 可以二選一或者兩個用晒
[2] 即係胡志偉嗰單 – 民主國家仆街極都冇聽過警察夠膽打議員
[3] 講到中信差D變希斯堡2.0應該會對外國球迷幾有用
[4] 數住4單先,其他例子等有人問/challenge既時候再攞出黎
[5] 病人私隱呢個point應該好好講
[6] 即係梁天琦嗰單
2019-06-26 00:25:04
太冗長啦 國際好多人知香港抗爭 其實反送中已經其次
精簡啲 話要爭取民主/普選先有soundbite 同埋真正治標
2019-06-26 00:25:41
頭先我好似見日文原文巴打同公開tg有聯絡,相信會再send?
2019-06-26 00:25:55
push
2019-06-26 00:26:39
多謝,辛苦你們
2019-06-26 00:26:48
2019-06-26 00:26:51
2019-06-26 00:26:51
推 依張真心得
有香港路牌、警民對立(睇到班黑警點對市民)。
2019-06-26 00:27:01
感激
2019-06-26 00:27:03
建議 Title We shall never surrender 改成 Hong Kongers never surrender

等人一睇就知講HK,就咁We仲要睇內文搵唔夠eye ball drawing
2019-06-26 00:27:10
其實都加咗個QR Code落去
不如將背景嘢放哂上網啦
2019-06-26 00:27:25
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