【眾籌】我地出咗final draft啦！！！！

家樂牌通心粉 · 2019-06-25T20:07:44+08:00

感謝各個連登仔女，各界人士大力支持及相助！！最後我地條team同我要攬炒巴團隊一齊改好以下呢個draft， 6月28日嘅New York Times有全頁ad，到時見！！！（好多外國報紙唔會做頭版，我地盡咗力。但係我地而家都繼續同其他報紙有聯絡，日、英、澳、法、德、台都有努力準備緊，希望有好消息！唔好意思因為一直好忙所以無覆大家留言，但係我地有巴絲有留意住架！感謝大家！！！） _________________________________________________________________________ Dear New York Times Readers, We are a group of concerned citizens who have been among the two million protesters marching on the streets of Hong Kong. This is our sincere plea for your help to defend our sovereignty and freedoms. Here is why you should care. In 2019, the Hong Kong SAR Government proposed a bill that would allow the extradition of alleged “fugitives” from Hong Kong to China, a country that is notorious for its disrespect for the rule of law. The judicial system in China has a conviction rate of 99.9%, and prisoners are known to have suffered from severe violations of human rights. Bankers, businessmen, tourists, and even ordinary Hongkongers could be arrested and sent to China for trials of alleged crimes and fabricated accusations. Hong Kong will cease to be a free economic zone, which has long served the world’s most prominent businesses. This is why two million of us took to the streets. We were unarmed. We had only helmets, umbrellas and plastic wrap. In return, the police suppressed us by unleashing 150 tear gas canisters shot in close range, aiming batons at our heads, and firing rubber bullets and bean bag rounds. Numerous peaceful protesters were unjustifiably arrested, interrogated, and stigmatized as “rioters". Hong Kong’s Chief Executive Carrie Lam has announced a suspension of the Extradition Bill which is NOT equivalent to withdrawal. We urge our government to agree to our three demands: 1. To completely withdraw the Extradition Bill. 2. To release all the arrested unconditionally and undertake not to prosecute any of the protestors. 3. To appoint an independent commission of inquiry to look into incidents of police brutality. In view of the upcoming G20 summit and the meeting between Trump and Xi, we implore you to deliver our concerns and demands to your governments. We urge you to stand with us in preserving Hong Kong’s freedom and autonomy under Chinese rule. Thank you. Yours truly, Hongkongers

業餘奶茶控 2019-06-25 23:38:51

你肯定日文嗰篇係以NYT嗰份做藍本??
我日文唔算好都睇得出好大分別，同埋樓上位巴打嗰篇都應該好過樓主嗰篇唔少
而家變相可能其他語言都有問題
始終機會難得，可唔可以再check check

FaceOfFact 2019-06-25 23:39:22

推呢個

巴絲們加油！盡做！

鴨仔 2019-06-25 23:40:20

辛苦各位

BCG 2019-06-25 23:40:25

其實呢張係咪NYT交上去既版黎
因為之前睇好似係有CHING改左改先變成咁

高田健太 2019-06-25 23:40:34

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甜於塵 2019-06-25 23:42:00

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BunBunBun 2019-06-25 23:42:48

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木冬一立風 2019-06-25 23:43:38

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業餘奶茶控 2019-06-25 23:43:43

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是對的終於會碰到 2019-06-25 23:43:52

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業餘奶茶控 2019-06-25 23:43:59

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月中獨酌 2019-06-25 23:44:06

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貓奴28 2019-06-25 23:44:19

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是對的終於會碰到 2019-06-25 23:44:27

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BunBunBun 2019-06-25 23:44:29

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豆漿師傅 2019-06-25 23:44:36

係’protester’ 唔係’protestor’啊

潛行空間 2019-06-25 23:44:59

感謝各位付出既努力

Matata 2019-06-25 23:45:30

又submit咗
咁其實我地係咪已經唔洗討論

秋葉園丁 2019-06-25 23:45:45

呢將相無留意香港遊行新聞係唔會知乜野嚟
可唔可以用將簡單又震撼既相
例如警察向大班逃人放催淚彈或開槍
要知道版面唔吸引人地連字都唔會睇

【眾籌】我地出咗final draft啦！！！！

家樂牌通心粉