【眾籌】我地出咗final draft啦！！！！

第一段可以講background facts (i.e. 冇普選 送中)
第二段入正題 話呢d舉動證明北京不斷干預香港自治同侵犯人權
第三段要學識留白 唔好講三點訴求 係要support Hong Kong ppl in defending our fundamental human rights and autonomy

好似已經submit咗

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睇comment呀樓主

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好老實 PLS SAVE乜乜 我見到真係會WFC 自己都搞唔掂
但係睇到呢句 我起碼第一個感覺會好奇先
唔理係咪鐘意睇人仆街定係睇熱鬧 起碼肯睇先
愈多人肯了解 就愈多同路人

有無人問到樓主之後既報紙內容如何，同考唔考慮登多次nyt
如果唔係又finalise無得傾

お疲れ様です〜

樓主回應下？

咪收工住啦

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有料到, 有IDEA
幫幫手啦

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無國界醫生定救助兒童會呀

呢個一定要改
唔改收得皮

內容點我都唔在意了

睇左今日早期段draft, 再睇呢份所謂final
first draft 寫d 野好好多。

真心建議用返first draft。

同意，其他各報的頭版可繼續改好佢
有在美國哈佛工作的朋友畀了少少意見：

Hong Kong people hope to make our voice heard in the international community by demanding the Hong Kong government:
(1) to immediately release all peaceful protestors,
(2) to unreservedly launch an independent investigation into police excessive violence on June 12,
(3) to completely withdraw the extradition bill.

We, the Hong Kongers who treasure the liberty to speak openly without fear of government restraint, solicit your support to enhance this part of the global village free of political interventions and infringement of human rights. Please help us bring our concerns to the attentions of your governments, legislators, and human rights activists. Join us in fighting for the common values that we all cherish on the avenue of building an ideal world!

署名係
Signed off by: Members of Hong Kong citizens
Or Hong Kong People in solidarity

處理咗D排版問題，睇落順暢D，大標題字體選咗futura，意思係未來咁解

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唔知係咪我日文唔好
佢地篇日文draft感覺都係怪怪地