【眾籌】我地出咗final draft啦！！！！

家樂牌通心粉 · 2019-06-25T20:07:44+08:00

感謝各個連登仔女，各界人士大力支持及相助！！最後我地條team同我要攬炒巴團隊一齊改好以下呢個draft， 6月28日嘅New York Times有全頁ad，到時見！！！（好多外國報紙唔會做頭版，我地盡咗力。但係我地而家都繼續同其他報紙有聯絡，日、英、澳、法、德、台都有努力準備緊，希望有好消息！唔好意思因為一直好忙所以無覆大家留言，但係我地有巴絲有留意住架！感謝大家！！！） _________________________________________________________________________ Dear New York Times Readers, We are a group of concerned citizens who have been among the two million protesters marching on the streets of Hong Kong. This is our sincere plea for your help to defend our sovereignty and freedoms. Here is why you should care. In 2019, the Hong Kong SAR Government proposed a bill that would allow the extradition of alleged “fugitives” from Hong Kong to China, a country that is notorious for its disrespect for the rule of law. The judicial system in China has a conviction rate of 99.9%, and prisoners are known to have suffered from severe violations of human rights. Bankers, businessmen, tourists, and even ordinary Hongkongers could be arrested and sent to China for trials of alleged crimes and fabricated accusations. Hong Kong will cease to be a free economic zone, which has long served the world’s most prominent businesses. This is why two million of us took to the streets. We were unarmed. We had only helmets, umbrellas and plastic wrap. In return, the police suppressed us by unleashing 150 tear gas canisters shot in close range, aiming batons at our heads, and firing rubber bullets and bean bag rounds. Numerous peaceful protesters were unjustifiably arrested, interrogated, and stigmatized as “rioters". Hong Kong’s Chief Executive Carrie Lam has announced a suspension of the Extradition Bill which is NOT equivalent to withdrawal. We urge our government to agree to our three demands: 1. To completely withdraw the Extradition Bill. 2. To release all the arrested unconditionally and undertake not to prosecute any of the protestors. 3. To appoint an independent commission of inquiry to look into incidents of police brutality. In view of the upcoming G20 summit and the meeting between Trump and Xi, we implore you to deliver our concerns and demands to your governments. We urge you to stand with us in preserving Hong Kong’s freedom and autonomy under Chinese rule. Thank you. Yours truly, Hongkongers

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711 2019-06-25 20:40:33

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啦斯Ben打 2019-06-25 20:40:38

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兩個世界兩個禮拜 2019-06-25 20:41:12

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日月年今日 2019-06-25 20:41:22

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通街都係處 2019-06-25 20:41:40

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冇翼嘅雀仔 2019-06-25 20:41:55

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風信子 2019-06-25 20:42:09

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accel 2019-06-25 20:42:12

Can it mention what we ask for is some kind of "fundamental" right, e.g. freedom, rule of law (democracy: i wonder if this word can appear or not)

文科乞衣 2019-06-25 20:42:17

defend our sovereignty and liberty
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711 2019-06-25 20:42:50

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【眾籌】我地出咗final draft啦！！！！

家樂牌通心粉