【眾籌】我地出咗final draft啦！！！！

家樂牌通心粉 · 2019-06-25T20:07:44+08:00

感謝各個連登仔女，各界人士大力支持及相助！！最後我地條team同我要攬炒巴團隊一齊改好以下呢個draft， 6月28日嘅New York Times有全頁ad，到時見！！！（好多外國報紙唔會做頭版，我地盡咗力。但係我地而家都繼續同其他報紙有聯絡，日、英、澳、法、德、台都有努力準備緊，希望有好消息！唔好意思因為一直好忙所以無覆大家留言，但係我地有巴絲有留意住架！感謝大家！！！） _________________________________________________________________________ Dear New York Times Readers, We are a group of concerned citizens who have been among the two million protesters marching on the streets of Hong Kong. This is our sincere plea for your help to defend our sovereignty and freedoms. Here is why you should care. In 2019, the Hong Kong SAR Government proposed a bill that would allow the extradition of alleged “fugitives” from Hong Kong to China, a country that is notorious for its disrespect for the rule of law. The judicial system in China has a conviction rate of 99.9%, and prisoners are known to have suffered from severe violations of human rights. Bankers, businessmen, tourists, and even ordinary Hongkongers could be arrested and sent to China for trials of alleged crimes and fabricated accusations. Hong Kong will cease to be a free economic zone, which has long served the world’s most prominent businesses. This is why two million of us took to the streets. We were unarmed. We had only helmets, umbrellas and plastic wrap. In return, the police suppressed us by unleashing 150 tear gas canisters shot in close range, aiming batons at our heads, and firing rubber bullets and bean bag rounds. Numerous peaceful protesters were unjustifiably arrested, interrogated, and stigmatized as “rioters". Hong Kong’s Chief Executive Carrie Lam has announced a suspension of the Extradition Bill which is NOT equivalent to withdrawal. We urge our government to agree to our three demands: 1. To completely withdraw the Extradition Bill. 2. To release all the arrested unconditionally and undertake not to prosecute any of the protestors. 3. To appoint an independent commission of inquiry to look into incidents of police brutality. In view of the upcoming G20 summit and the meeting between Trump and Xi, we implore you to deliver our concerns and demands to your governments. We urge you to stand with us in preserving Hong Kong’s freedom and autonomy under Chinese rule. Thank you. Yours truly, Hongkongers

美極獵人 2019-06-25 21:43:44

我相信文宣會睇意見, 改唔改到唔知.
但都認同要個scope大啲, 例如有傷者被警察拉落救護車被捕. 直情係人道危機, 亦可以話已經嚴重到超越"干涉內政"

柯基的屁屁 2019-06-25 21:44:04

推

撚雀和理非 2019-06-25 21:44:10

會唔會剩係義士件衫出黃色

褪色的夢 2019-06-25 21:44:14

其實都唔係總括黎講大家都係推個幾樣野

Midage 2019-06-25 21:44:22

真心，各位好勁

小小老鼠屎 2019-06-25 21:44:28

感激！

恭介同學 2019-06-25 21:44:39

屌，整得好好

籟粉皮 2019-06-25 21:45:21

感激

西裝友 2019-06-25 21:45:29

711 2019-06-25 21:45:37

今次咁趕點follow得切

侮辱我地中華民國 2019-06-25 21:46:13

好唔掂，重點唔突出，仲係講緊暫緩唔係撤回，如果我係美國人，講真見到篇無咩重點嘅文，唔係好知defend你嘅主權同自由與我有乜關係。連美國人、美國在港僑胞都有可能被中共拘捕都無講。
你要去外國登廣告，最緊要係講件事點解都關美國事，呢篇文講嘅嘢完全同美國人唔拉更。

爆谷兄弟 2019-06-25 21:46:30

辛苦哂!!!!!!! respect!!

大殺四方 2019-06-25 21:47:06

鬼佬好多大愛撚。當佢地上網搵資料發現連登仔cyber bully班警察，到時backfire仲難搞

懦夫的救星 2019-06-25 21:47:06

雞蛋迷 2019-06-25 21:47:08

Push

侮辱我地中華民國 2019-06-25 21:47:31

同意

2047 唔講埋？

水上悟志 2019-06-25 21:47:42

DrummingBeiBei 2019-06-25 21:47:44

This is much better!
May I suggest a title?

We, Hong Kongers, stand together to fight for our rights and freedom

Any thoughts?

我要做貓奴 2019-06-25 21:47:58

希望仲改到文唔好浪費左香港人嘅心意

敏黨教徒炭治郎 2019-06-25 21:48:05

辛苦晒兩team,大佬

【眾籌】我地出咗final draft啦！！！！

家樂牌通心粉