【眾籌】我地出咗final draft啦!!!!

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627中環古蹟遊
2019-06-25 22:00:01
係呀 可以幫下手呀!
2019-06-25 22:00:06
連登意見:

1. 標題用:We shall never surrender

2. 內容要加番對外國影響,同埋希望美國會為香港爭取普選,tone方面,應該要強硬多少少,唔好用beg/request/plead之類既字眼。

3.排版出現問題,唔好用英文對齊。

4. 圖片唔夠搶眼

5. 加埋hashtag: WeConnect

How about this?
2019-06-25 22:00:12
Liberate呢個字有浸太強烈的左味
2019-06-25 22:00:22
辛苦哂🙈🙈 發現冇題新聞自由 記者被打、限制採訪
2019-06-25 22:00:30
2019-06-25 22:00:32
finalize左啦,啱啱有人回應
2019-06-25 22:00:35
We shall never surrender 型到爆
2019-06-25 22:00:44
執咗D

Hongkongers shall never surrender.

The totalitarian government of China manifests its evilness in the proposal of the Extradition Law in Hong Kong, a law that not only destroys the autonomy of Hong Kong, but also endangers the safety of all foreigners who chance to travel or stay in this land of freedom. The government refused to listen to the voice of 2 million of protesters, and they even sent the Hong Kong Police Force to terrorize the people.

We are lovers of freedom living in a place called Hong Kong that has fallen into the dark hand of totalitarianism since 1997. Still we have never forgotten the true worth of freedom, democracy and human rights. They never succeeded in convincing us otherwise.

We will stand firm to fight for our autonomy. We will stand firm to fight for our democracy. And we will resist totalitarianism in the name of freedom. Hongkongers shall never surrender.

The Extradition Law must be completely withdrawn, and, in addition, the autonomy of Hong Kong must be guaranteed with the introduction of true Universal Suffrage in the Legislative Council and thereafter the Chief Executive. Join us in the fight against totalitarianism by delivering our concerns and demands to your governments in view of the upcoming G20 summit.

#LiberateHK
2019-06-25 22:00:58

強烈反對
2019-06-25 22:01:08
WeConnect同林鄭扯上關係喎
感覺會混亂
2019-06-25 22:01:09
push
2019-06-25 22:01:15
我建議用動畫其中一幕做圖

動話artwork又靚又型,引人去睇長文同動畫

e.g.

2019-06-25 22:01:22
pish
2019-06-25 22:01:25
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