Appeal
想由6.5去7係咪不智/浪費金錢
係可以寫多minimal word limit好多架 但係囉 紅字
哎 唔想考呀
未考過CE 同AL呀
不過IELTS對你地考過CE 同AL既人黎講應該易好多
You live in a room in college which you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because he or she always has friends visiting. They have parties in the room and sometimes borrow your things without asking you.
Write a letter to the Accommodation Officer at the college and ask for a new room next term. You would prefer a single room. Explain your reasons.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Peter Park and one of the students living in the rooms provided by the college. I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with my roommate and request for (request係verb個陣要加prep 上一篇已講)a new room next term.
First, my roommate always brings friends to our room and have throws/hosts (唔會have) parties. He even invited three friends to our roomandthe night before the(唔洗the - 第一次講唔洗the) final exams. My concentration level was dropped(affected - 影響) by the noise that was 唔洗that was 都得made by them.
Moreover, my things(possessions/belongings) havebeenwere (一定passive voice; d 嘢唔會自己有腳走)disappeared and later I was being told that he took them awaywithout my permissionconsent. (For example/instance,)My calculatorwasdisappeared right before (right before係你上堂前嗰一刻;就咁before)my mathematics class. I had to do the calculations? by bare hand during the lesson. (咁你手/心算計倒洗鬼用計數機;應該講搞到你唔方便/俾老師罰)
I am afraid that my academic result resultswill drop(will be impacted) due to the disturbances(nuisances). It would be appreciated if you could arrange another room for me next term. A single room is preferred in orderto avoid the same problem.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Peter Parker
1. Room出現咗4次 drop 2次, 諗諗佢
2. Roommate第3身單數 之後個動詞要加-s
3. sentence structure
兩個句子 用and連接應該係同一個subject
例如:
a) I have an apple. I have an orange.
再用and連接
b) I have an apple and an orange.
所以應該係
my roommate always brings friends to our room.
my roommate always has parties.
4. 個名
5. My things 用belongings好似更好 but not a big problem
6. result用drop好似有啲怪 scores, marks用drop會更好
做左一本cambridge reading 但一半都岩唔到
有冇易上手既方法
aim overall 6
我覺得reading係鬥多識得多生字
今日考完第一次 覺得時間分配先係最大挑戰
一篇reading有一半字都唔識
都唔知4月8點考
今日考完覺得真正篇reading 易過Cambridge 嗰本嘢好多
點樣易法
係可以寫多minimal word limit好多架 但係囉 紅字
哎 唔想考呀
未考過CE 同AL呀
不過IELTS對你地考過CE 同AL既人黎講應該易好多
考過CE AL 唔等於易架
就算u grad完考 勉強先拉倒6 大有人在
聽過有人得5
writing真係好講生字同文法
要靠寫得多
加油樓主
想問下咁多位巴絲, 小弟25/2考左ielts, speaking 撞到華人女考官,得 5,自問講得唔差,應該會有6,如果appeal會唔會好不智?如果appeal會唔會有機會係鬼佬改番?
利申,如果speaking升到6既話overall可以升 0.5
想問下咁多位巴絲, 小弟25/2考左ielts, speaking 撞到華人女考官,得 5,自問講得唔差,應該會有6,如果appeal會唔會好不智?如果appeal會唔會有機會係鬼佬改番?
利申,如果speaking升到6既話overall可以升 0.5
想問下咁多位巴絲, 小弟25/2考左ielts, speaking 撞到華人女考官,得 5,自問講得唔差,應該會有6,如果appeal會唔會好不智?如果appeal會唔會有機會係鬼佬改番?
利申,如果speaking升到6既話overall可以升 0.5
而家成績係?
三月十八日考留名
有冇一樣未考嘅巴絲打一齊加下油
之前一直覺得仲有好多時間可以慢慢溫
點知早幾日就收到佢EMAIL同SMS提我18號要考啦
三月十八日考留名
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想問下咁多位巴絲, 小弟25/2考左ielts, speaking 撞到華人女考官,等 5,自問講得唔差,應該會有6,如果appeal會唔會好不智?如果appeal會唔會有機會係鬼佬改番?
利申,如果speaking升到6既話overall可以升 0.5
三月十八日考留名
SAME HERE
Me too
writing speaking 好似點都上唔到7或以上
求指點
小弟上次考
8.0 9.0 6.5 6.5 overall 7.5
三月十八日考留名
SAME HERE
Me too
writing speaking 好似點都上唔到7或以上
求指點
小弟上次考
8.0 9.0 6.5 6.5 overall 7.5
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