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媽我得啦
9 9 7 7 無想像過有咁易 可能係我好好彩啦

媽我得啦
9 9 7 7 無想像過有咁易 可能係我好好彩啦

媽我得啦
9 9 7 7 無想像過有咁易 可能係我好好彩啦

就尼考無温過
aim 7.0 only
對writing無乜信心
可以點臨急抱佛腳？

你幾時考呀？ 我未有咁快講writing
睇多啲sample answers
大概知道要寫d咩會高分
自己再試下寫 再對比下差啲咩
我上次剩係睇咗samples 無練過 有啲低分
所以最重要 真係要寫!!

賽後報告
淨係操過一次writing同幾次reading
最後結果係 lis7 read8 writting6.5 speak6.5
overall7
listening真係要專心 自己有一題發左夢 就咁miss左
writing用左半粒鐘做part a 好彩最後夠鐘做part b
speaking係鬼佬 其實覺得自己講得幾好 反而得6.5 我諗係因為第三part無乜point
最後 大家要加油

媽我得啦
9 9 7 7 無想像過有咁易 可能係我好好彩啦

賽後報告
淨係操過一次writing同幾次reading
最後結果係 lis7 read8 writting6.5 speak6.5
overall7
listening真係要專心 自己有一題發左夢 就咁miss左
writing用左半粒鐘做part a 好彩最後夠鐘做part b
speaking係鬼佬 其實覺得自己講得幾好 反而得6.5 我諗係因為第三part無乜point
最後 大家要加油

留名 想6月考
溫緊writing
aim overall 有7.5

參考左大家意見，改左第一篇


Dear Mr. White,

I am Peter Parker and I have enrolled in the summer course of "ABC" college to study English. My name is Peter Parker and I am one of the English summer course students at ABC college. (你寫enrolled 唔係咁話倒俾人知你宜家個status; 你報咗名可以話have enrolled但你宜家係讀緊)I am writing to complain about the accommodation provided by the school and would like to request for (request + for sth)a rearrangement.

I am currently sharing a flat (living樓上絲打有講)living with 3(書信細過10用英文 other students. As they are having a summer break of their studyredundant, it seems (會建議唔用seems呢個字,個tone唔啱)that they are in a holiday mood. (as/because of/since 係因為...所以...連接句子要講清楚個因果關係/影響)They come back very late and make a lot of noise. I have been woken up by them at during (at midnight =搭正凌晨零時) midnight 唔洗"-"the mid-night frequently and my rest has been interrupted, so has my study. There are a lot of students enjoying their summer break time at the moment. Coincidentally, my three roomates who were assigned to share the flat with me, are currently not taking any summer courses. Understand that summer breaks are the time for having fun and relax, yet some of their activities cause negative impacts on my study.

My rest has been seriously interrupted as they often hold overnight parties. With sleep deprivation, there is an apparent drop of my concentration level in class which constitutes to my poor performance recently.I cannot focus in the classes due to insufficient sleep, especially in morning lessons. That results in my poor performance in quizzes.

It is a big contrast to my expectation that I was anticipating students who were arerespectful, helpful and hard-workinghardworking唔洗"-". As such, we could discuss the lesson content, assist each other and get enough rest. I am a little bit disappointed as there is a spark contrast between my expectation and the current situation. Once I expect studying at xxx college would be fruitful and enjoyable......... blahblahblah

I am wondering if you could arrange another apartment for me to live with my coursemates who share the same schedule and goals. Therefore, we can minimize the disturbance of rest 有啲牽強and study together after lesson.
It would be very much appreciated if you could arrange another apartment for me, hopefully with some of my current coursemates who share a similar studying schedule, in order to increase the overall effectiveness........

I am looking forward to your favorablereply.

Yours sincerely,
Peter Parker

以marking scheme睇
句子多啲連接兼長啲
作之前諗下有咩深字可用
tonality 方面要用多啲 could, would, may, might
passive voice 用多啲代替 I

加油

online幾時先有得睇結果

Task 1 至少寫150字 封信好似開始有啲太長
Fulfill到問題個三個points 同埋有focus就得
同埋task 2 既分係task 1既兩倍

7.0 8.0 6.0 6.0overall都係7.0謝天謝地啦都要不過要全部components過6.5先有用

多謝大家意見
呢兩日溫下書 先再寫過

岩岩考完

You live in a room in college which you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because he or she always has friends visiting. They have parties in the room and sometimes borrow your things without asking you.

Write a letter to the Accommodation Officer at the college and ask for a new room next term. You would prefer a single room. Explain your reasons.


Dear Sir/Madam,

I am Peter Park and one of the students living in the rooms provided by the college. I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with my roommate and request a new room next term.

First, my roommate always bring friends to our room and have parties. He even invited three friends to our room and the night before the final exams. My concentration level was dropped by the noise made by them.

Moreover, my things have been disappeared and later I was told that he took them without my consent. My calculator was disappeared right before my mathematics class. I had to do the calculation by bare hand during the lesson.

I am afraid that my academic result will drop due to the disturbances. It would be appreciated if you could arrange another room for me next term. A single room is preferred to avoid the same problem.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,
Peter Parker

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夜啲幫你睇下

樓主考完ielts 未

樓主考完ielts 未

未 仲有十幾日先考

賽後報告
8 8.5 6.5 6.5 LRWS
第一次考算係咁

writing
想問下你地點練writing

writing睇倒grammar 句子連接 結構 用字 表達 各方面既嘢都會評核 可以話最容易最赤裸裸反映倒英文水平

另外 背咗啲罐頭好型既句子兼寫埋落去應該會高分
呢個當然係會加分 但如果考官同時見倒好多其他文法錯誤 佢都會覺得你係死背多過真係有咁既水平

小弟愚見
最基本每個禮拜都寫一篇長文同短文
加 學(背)一啲生字 專攻搞錯咗或弱既問題
係最快可以整體提升水平

樓主有講過篇嘢搞到好長同task2多分啲
CE 同AL篇文大概要600-800字?(唔記得)
不過未聽過有人 寫佢要你寫既字數攞倒A/5* (當然可能有 而唔知)
攞A既起碼寫多一半甚至一倍1000-1500字
當年考IELTS 我都寫多過佢要求既字數

當然你可以話寫得多錯得多
啲時間點分配 寫倒佢要求就得 有咩咁多要寫 宜家考英文唔係考字數 等等等等

呢個可以留俾各位作取捨

有冇巴打聽日考
Reading 啲分成日都有波動，一時好低一時又高返，好驚炒reading

屌 writing 6.5分...