分享常見錯誤嘅商業英文

mistakeS，所以are

利申：鳩up

enclosed with xxxx 已經夠做

有個fg成日send email “May you do sth sth”
聽落好似點人做野咁 May乜鬼you

呢個po幾高汁，學到野

我用另多幾個例子可能你會易明d
正面例子：
1. Are you interested in Mary?
2. I did interest Mary.
3. Could I interest you in our best selling product?
4. Could I interest you in Peter?
5. Did the book interest you?

解說
1. 你對Mary感到興趣嗎？
2. 我真係令到Mary(對我)感到興趣。
3. 我可唔可以提起你對我地最好賣既產品既興趣？(氹人買野用)
4. 我可唔可以令你對Peter感到興趣 (唔一定係做媒人用，例如有個project要用人，你可以用呢句黎推薦Peter)
5. 本書有冇令你感興趣？

用中文翻譯interest既用法係唔多順口。
簡單黎講，第一個例子係Mary大波又靚女，所以你被Mary吸引到。
第二個例子係掉轉，你高大威猛，虎驅一震，迷例Mary。

你係EOI?

千祈千祈唔好叫上司幫你睇mistakes
人地係SEO 亦都唔係老奉有時間幫你scrutiny

人地第一印象就係你求鳩其寫啲野唔check 就交功課俾我

就咁
Grateful for your comments on the attached xxxxx (e.g. LM )

已經講到你嘅目的

lm

looked with thanks

The door opens - 指門係識開呢個特徵
The door is open - 楝門係開住呢個狀態
The door is opened - 指楝門被人開咗呢件事?

明明please 同kindly 既意義係一樣都可以比你9 up 成咁

係外國返咗工幾年
呢排home office 男朋友咁啱見到我send email
問我知唔知request句最後唔洗用問號
例如：Please could I confirm with you the meeting would be at 4pm
最後係打full stop 唔係問號
係咪得我咁低b

利串佢英國人

點解可以咁多負皮
咁多人唔識用

可以help somebody do something
亦可以help somebody to do something

如果help後面無對象，直接用bare infinitive

就咁help唔可以跟gerund，除非係can't help或者couldn't help ("忍不住"咁解)
e.g. This movie is amusing. I can't help laughing.

上加下就要加，仲有加咗之後分段要tun入一格先為之成個格式啱，應該係
Dear xxx,

Xxxx,xxx

Best,
xxx

同

Dear xxx

Xxxx,xxx

Best
Cxx

咁如果同樣係問句時
應該幾時用Do you或Are you?
Do you interested in Mary?
Are you interested in Mary?
好似冇乜分別

以我所知加to係唔啱嘅
同埋如果係help somebody做啲嘢
係咪可以考慮講help somebody with (task)
e.g. can you help chris with the project

Help to check一定錯
可以話help sb with blah blah blah

真呀 開頭一定會講 Let’s talk about/ Let’s discuss

唔識好大體咁寫email，佢又唔捉我，完全唔知點改善

Revert係intransitive verb，唔可以就咁revert you，中間要加to

好正確, 鋪排同邏輯同重點重要過所謂grammar好多, 大部分唔明對方講乜都唔關英文事, 而係內容