分享常見錯誤嘅商業英文

咁樣寫到明唔係仲似催緊人？xxx will be proceeded subject to

Look forward to hearing from you / receiving your reply 係扮有禮貌

同埋subject to 可唔可以改為 upon receiving your confirmation?

文法正確同不正確嘅分別

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All,

完

咁per conversation/discussion係咪相同意思

suggest to
suggest +gerund

之前有個同事交接啲工作
每封email都一堆please, please, please
睇到頭都痛埋

It would be nice if...

Thanks 後面加!

inquiry / enquiry

Reference 冇s?

我甚少用 kind understanding 除非個email 要講既內容係要拒絕客人既要求

Do me a favor

依到up同down係咪都係解去

我都請教咗相同問題，有無ching可以confirm
但我學既係可以唔加to，但唔係咁先啱

如果唔formal, 我通常noted with thanks 就算

仲開post

I would like to know if you could XXX
May I ask for your assistance on XXX
Could/Would you please XXX

Thanks for your help in advance

同意 upon receiving your confirmation 會更好

用因果其實好中性
我嘅重點都係confirmation > reply
更加實在具體兼有禮、顯得積極處理問題

「你答咗我，我就會點做」
對上攞Approval 、對同輩問清詳情再行動，都通用

我再用啲實在啲嘅例子啦

例政府部門搞活動，寫信搵嘉賓講talk

得體嘅講法可以係：

Grateful for confirmation of your availability on or before 21 October

會有誠意同直接過 叫人reply

嚴格上黎講有to同冇to都可以
有to唔算係錯，只係冇必要
鬼佬通常可以縮短咁寫或講就會盡縮
我自己都係唔加to

可以參考：
https://ell.stackexchange.com/questions/47221/help-to-do-something-or-help-do-something
https://english.stackexchange.com/questions/3578/what-is-the-correct-way-to-use-infinitive-after-the-verb-help-with-or-without
https://www.bbc.co.uk/worldservice/learningenglish/youmeus/learnit/learnitv226.shtml#:~:text=Help%20is%20a%20verb%20that,it%20sometimes%20sounds%20more%20informal.
https://dictionary.cambridge.org/grammar/british-grammar/help-somebody-to-do

成日用，please 完唔覆就會please kindly, 以為係有禮貌啲咁解，但係心底真係講緊唔撚該

as talked

有啲仲要 as per our conversation over the telephone