[2017DSE] 英文科試前試後討論區+加油站(2)

想問下其實part A洗唔洗講點develop a link to the community

Intro寫咗少少justifying background

Part A Benefit唔一定要講對老人家架嘛
我寫左俾學生有個機會去工作實習同埋提升學校聲譽

elderly home wor

Elderly home都係同活動果Part有關連啫，Benefit講返學校去做善事有咩好處都應該唔死
利申，活動寫左邀請Drama Club表演粵劇俾廢老消閒開心下

因為我既諗法係去說服校長，同佢講老人有咩得益，正常校長都『關我撚事』
所以我講左對學生同學校

根本題目就唔撚make sense

agger寫俾校長講elderly home benefits做乜9

今次份reading幾易，不過唔敢對答案

elderly嗰題part b正係講咗對elderly有乜好處 但冇寫對elderly home有乜好處
會唔會扣好多分

Part A Benefit唔一定要講對老人家架嘛
我寫左俾學生有個機會去工作實習同埋提升學校聲譽

elderly home wor

Elderly home都係同活動果Part有關連啫，Benefit講返學校去做善事有咩好處都應該唔死
利申，活動寫左邀請Drama Club表演粵劇俾廢老消閒開心下

因為我既諗法係去說服校長，同佢講老人有咩得益，正常校長都『關我撚事』
所以我講左對學生同學校

根本題目就唔撚make sense

agger寫俾校長講elderly home benefits做乜9

睇果陣都唔明 點解要講elderly home benefits而唔係對學生/學校嘅benefits

elderly嗰題part b正係講咗對elderly有乜好處 但冇寫對elderly home有乜好處
會唔會扣好多分

我係HKEAA會睇point畀一半當weak linkage

Part A Benefit唔一定要講對老人家架嘛
我寫左俾學生有個機會去工作實習同埋提升學校聲譽

elderly home wor

Elderly home都係同活動果Part有關連啫，Benefit講返學校去做善事有咩好處都應該唔死
利申，活動寫左邀請Drama Club表演粵劇俾廢老消閒開心下

因為我既諗法係去說服校長，同佢講老人有咩得益，正常校長都『關我撚事』
所以我講左對學生同學校

根本題目就唔撚make sense

agger寫俾校長講elderly home benefits做乜9

睇果陣都唔明 點解要講elderly home benefits而唔係對學生/學校嘅benefits

Why not both

未有PW?

part a離撚左題part b要幾多分先拎到合格

Part A Benefit唔一定要講對老人家架嘛
我寫左俾學生有個機會去工作實習同埋提升學校聲譽

elderly home wor

Elderly home都係同活動果Part有關連啫，Benefit講返學校去做善事有咩好處都應該唔死
利申，活動寫左邀請Drama Club表演粵劇俾廢老消閒開心下

因為我既諗法係去說服校長，同佢講老人有咩得益，正常校長都『關我撚事』
所以我講左對學生同學校

根本題目就唔撚make sense

agger寫俾校長講elderly home benefits做乜9

校長想你做埋佢個份講下點說服老人院囉
題目要求persaude校長為前提下要有呢項, 你話做乜9啦

冇做partA係咪1硬

Btw樓主覺得呢份reading幾成先有5

冇做partA係咪1硬

點解連part a 都唔試下做

依家覆

紙人巴打可唔可以幫手睇吓我作文內容


Part A :

activity 叫 'Teen counsellor' 內容就話啲青少年每星期會談班長者起碼3次，可以同佢哋建立類似grandparent/grandchild 嘅關係。

benefit : 1. completely forgotten
2. good for the management of the elderly home. Regular visit allow the elderlies the voice the opinion on poor hygiene/quality of life. therefore the management of the elderly home will get to know the problem quicker 之類


Part B Q7

NEETs

Reasons
1. Study pressure are much higher than before, some youth might not be able to bear the pressure > so that they choose the become a school drop out

2. Youths are more self-centred > can't cooperate with co-worker > become jobless eventually

3. Youths have higher self-esteem than the generation before, when getting job training, they often treated in a harsh manner > They always want their views to be valued 師傅(masters/teachers) don't care about their view 之類 > not to take job training


Solution
1. Government can introduce funding the create a short-term working programme when youths can learn how to cooperate with others and some working skills.

2. Promote the message of acceptance to youths.


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另外係ig pm 咗你，唔該畀一畀個password

Part a 個benefit同個活動好似冇乜關係
Part b問題係問reasons?
D reasons唔太解釋到
你淨係話佢地係咁
咁點解佢地係咁

Part A 就寫左4段

第一就講來函目的

第二就建議搞唱舊歌同玩遊戲

第三就提出送咩禮物比老人院

第四就結尾

Part b 就揀Q5

第一就講來函目的

第二就話建議將蛋撻列為保育選擇，同講原因.

第三，就講應該幾時保育到

第四，就話建議將麻雀列為保育選擇，同講原因.

第五，就講應該幾時保育到

第六，結尾同寄望.

已知part A離左一半，而家想知part b有無離

除左禮物都ok
但part b應該要3個原因(?)

如果我將對elderly home 好處拆左做對elderly同owner of elderly home得唔得

咁就得
只要你拉番去elderly home有關就得

話elderly home 不嬲都好dull 同empty
幫佢地decorate間野 從而令到佢地成間野個atmpsphere開心啲
係咪ok

Good point

reading 我覺得同上年難道差唔多都係咁易

A比上年難d
B1今年難d
B2今年易d

我都IG DIRECT左巴打 求PW

diu 我partA寫咗elderly 會有sense of belonging in the community 等佢地唔會覺得被忽略，同埋create 呢個關愛既atmosphere
係咪off topic jor？

Little bit

冇份卷點做marking

咩冇份卷點做marking?

part a話搞open day 比老人家參觀學校係咪離題收得皮

Errrrr

冇做partA係咪1硬

點解連part a 都唔試下做

小弟英文底子差到喊 睇唔明佢要我做乜莖 但係都叫屌左啲格式出黎