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唔知係我錯覺定係點,新讀者由連登開始睇然後一邊睇留言,葉爸係唔係見太多人屌太拖太長所以就草草收左個尾咁…?
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我覺得葉爸唔洗太在意人地點講,本身你打算點寫就堅持落去,呢個故一開頭真係超級正,超級精彩,超級有代入感同切身體會到熙熙既感受
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但後面感覺有啲草率同無咩代入感同感情了
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希望幾年後又可以睇到一篇故一樣係咁用心鋪排同埋有切身感受既故
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不過
後來再睇埋O Camp故,發現呢個故咁正都係因為Ocamp埋得啲伏筆回收得好到位,睇完秋兒姐姐呢個故再睇Ocamp故就會覺得:「唔怪得之個劇情會係咁啦」既感覺,好過癮,唔想熙熙年輕既故事咁快就完
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劇透注意
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