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To commence with, myriads of people nowadays neglect filial piety and attach importance to the pursuit of career success.
Mr. Wong is a time-honoured man living in my neighbourhood, who is a typical case of the elderly living alone. His wife passed away five years ago and rarely does his son visit him. According to Mr. Wong, his son has been preoccupied with his business and the quest for success instead of caring about him. Evidently, the case of Mr. Wong is just the tip of the iceberg in Hong Kong. With our culture being strongly influenced by Confucianism in bygone days, people usually paid a lot of attention to filial duties, regarding taking care of their parents as the most important responsibility in their life journey. However, with the spread of western culture in Hong Kong, individualism has become the norm in our society. With a view to concentrating on their work and pursuing career success, youngsters tend to turn a blind eye to the plight of the elderly, living separately from their elderly parents.
As we can see, the decline of Confucianism and the pursuit of career success have led to the rising tide of senior citizens living alone.