ChatGPT評語:
The main issue here is the excessive use of adjectives and adverbs, which can make the writing feel melodramatic and overloaded. For instance, "fiercely rang," "bustling school canteen," "ravenous wolves," "stomachs twisting into knots," "ruthlessly gulping down," and "hot noodles" all contribute to this. Simplifying and balancing the language would make the description more effective and natural.