發現自己寫英文好累贅，可以點改善？
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以前學個時只記得第二句係係會用於講緊好多 "boy" 喺現場，咁你想講邊個 unhappy 用。如果唔係，就咁 The boy looks unhappy.就得啦，咁第一句唔一定有好多 "boy" 喺現場。不過以前學，記錯唔奇，而且平時，邊鳩個理咁 detail
1. try to be specific in your choice of word; and
2. if you read your sentence out loud, and its a mouthful, your sentence is probably too long-winded.
My version:
To reduce recidivism among ex-offenders, the government should devise rehabilitation programs or policies that target specific indviduals.
2. if you read your sentence out loud, and its a mouthful, your sentence is probably too long-winded.
My version:
To reduce recidivism among ex-offenders, the government should devise rehabilitation programs or policies that target specific indviduals.
平時邊鳩個理，又唔係寫英文搵食，係個時學英文，有幾堂學，學由一句短句變到馬撚咁長同同由一句馬撚咁長句子變到短句，個時講過；其實我自已都唔理，係見到，講吓吹水
我自己就係
ok, take the key words apart and reorient them.
1. students
2. take the vocational training courses
3. grasping the fundamental understanding of future career planning
Now reorient them into a complete sentence:
The vocational training courses helps students to grasp the fundamental understanding of future career planning.
Then polish the sentence for it to be reader-friendly:
The vocational training courses helps students to understand the basics of career planning.
1. students
2. take the vocational training courses
3. grasping the fundamental understanding of future career planning
Now reorient them into a complete sentence:
The vocational training courses helps students to grasp the fundamental understanding of future career planning.
Then polish the sentence for it to be reader-friendly:
The vocational training courses helps students to understand the basics of career planning.
屌唔怪得 睇你段野十足十官腔野/論文咁
唔知要幾耐先寫到咁
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In order to ease the situation, the government is supposed to launch certain schemes or policies to address the problem.
我都正想講呢句。呢句係完全冇意思
我都正想講呢句。呢句係完全冇意思
Ching呢句點睇？
With the advance of technology, more and more people have addicted to using smartphones which lower their efficiency in working.
With the advance of technology, more and more people have addicted to using smartphones which lower their efficiency in working.
睇壞腦
Ching呢句點睇？ok, take the key words apart and reorient them.relative clause冇問題the students should be required to take the vocational training courses with a view to grasping the fundamental understanding of future career planning.
the都冇問題
不如你po幾句出來大家研究下有乜問題啦
類似呢啲，一睇就知好撚累贅
1. students
2. take the vocational training courses
3. grasping the fundamental understanding of future career planning
Now reorient them into a complete sentence:
The vocational training courses helps students to grasp the fundamental understanding of future career planning.
Then polish the sentence for it to be reader-friendly:
The vocational training courses helps students to understand the basics of career planning.
With the advance of technology, more and more people are addicted to using smartphones which lower their efficiency in working.
Did you check the word addict?
Check check sin la
Check check sin la
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第二句係is sitting 坐緊係到 所以有現場feel
有時，that is xyzz, 長撚到 去到個verb已經唔記左個subject係乜要睇番轉頭
the boy sat on the bench looked unhappy
係頭先坐係到個細路
sitting on the bench
係坐緊係到個細路
係頭先坐係到個細路
sitting on the bench
係坐緊係到個細路
are addicted 然後addicted唔係verb係adj?
點解有聲
我好似成日聽類似句子
我好似成日聽類似句子
係呀 addicted to is an adj
可以check埋呢句其他嘢啦
可以check埋呢句其他嘢啦