利申：已出黎做野幾年
發現自己寫英文好累贅，可以點改善？
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用好多that, who, which 呢啲relative clause，又或者the等等嘅字，有咩方法可以精簡自己啲濕鳩英文？
利申：已出黎做野幾年
利申：已出黎做野幾年
grammarly can help
no bullshit lets go
Skip unnecessary words
Quick take off
Open mouth
Yell harder
Quick take off
Open mouth
Yell harder
其實係咪真係有用，諗緊俾唔俾錢買
有聲 煩膠廣告
應該唔關中英文事，你搞清自己最想表達D乜就可以精簡啲
同二。同埋多啲用短句。少D變化總好過錯/1999。
Proofread 好有幫助
呢個建議很好
relative clause冇問題
the都冇問題
不如你po幾句出來大家研究下有乜問題啦
the都冇問題
不如你po幾句出來大家研究下有乜問題啦
幾好提意；其實睇樓主想講乜
The boy sitting on the bench looks unhappy.
The boy who is sitting on the bench looks unhappy.
有些微唔同意思
而且 relative clause唔怕用，不過有時，你不如拆句子，唔洗句句馬撚咁長，
The boy sitting on the bench looks unhappy.
The boy who is sitting on the bench looks unhappy.
有些微唔同意思
而且 relative clause唔怕用，不過有時，你不如拆句子，唔洗句句馬撚咁長，
用英文思維/角度去諗
唔好先諗中文再打英文
唔好先諗中文再打英文
寫中文咪得囉
而家都嘗試緊用pp，例如
the man wearing blue shirt is a member of lihkg
但寫慣relative clause好難改
the man wearing blue shirt is a member of lihkg
但寫慣relative clause好難改
有睇開外國黑白片，用英文字幕，睇冇問題，但寫就做唔到
member of lihkg
呢種字可以改做一個名詞
例如去演唱會的人變concert-goer
member of lihkg變 lin-den-child
呢種字可以改做一個名詞
例如去演唱會的人變concert-goer
member of lihkg變 lin-den-child
the students should be required to take the vocational training courses with a view to grasping the fundamental understanding of future career planning.
類似呢啲，一睇就知好撚累贅
類似呢啲，一睇就知好撚累贅
有時用得好多，每段都有一兩句
不了
有時佢係錯
有時佢係錯
係，xx of yy呢種表達手法我又係用好多
lihkg-son
lihkg-son
網上面啲grammar checking其係咪只捉到基本錯，有時佢改到我成句都唔同