發現自己寫英文好累贅，可以點改善？

released/being released?

the咪多咗囉 係fucking

睇到childs都唔開胃

我覺得係教育問題
好多香港人d 英文都鳩考試用
同native 好難比

This is a good question
releasing from = active voice, participle (verb-ing)
released from = passive voice, past participle (verb in pp form)
being released from = he is being released from (佢剛被放)

'after'後面我用在noun phrase [releasing from jail] (即係一組冇verb嘅字組成一個noun) 所以要用 verb-ing

因此 after releasing from / after being 都可

正解

2022dser lm

寫完200字
就睇多次減到150
再睇多次減到120
起碼會精簡好多

我寫清楚D

releasing from = active voice, present participle (verb-ing)
released from = passive voice, past participle (verb in pp form)
being released from = he is being released from (佢剛被放)

'after'後面我用在noun phrase [releasing from jail] (即係一組冇verb嘅字組成一個noun) 所以要用 verb-ing

before/after都係一樣咁樣處理

因此 after releasing from / after being released from都可

Many criminals commit crimes again after releasing from jail.
Many criminals commit crimes again after being released from jail.

in order to ease the situation 同埋 to address the problem 係講緊同一樣嘢，是旦寫一個就得。仲有certain喺呢度無論係中定英都係冇表達任何additional/meaningful 嘅訊息。

我覺得樓主你有時唔係衰grammar，係要諗吓意思會唔會重覆。加油

建議樓主如果一唔識用vocab 就Google "that vocab" + collocation /sample sentence

e.g. phenomenon collocation
phenomenon sample sentence

lm

上面抽野我覺得寫The government should ... to combat recidivism就得
一下子查唔出recidivism就落repeat offences from released prisoners
同埋原句個tone好似接落去就要抽政府水咁
如果原意唔係咁就寫肯定啲，咩suppose呀or呀斬咗佢

我覺得如果只係懶得check 可以用grammarly premium check 啲basic errors. 另外佢會同你scan吓啲sentence有冇得shorten。
你可以試吓啱唔啱你

如果唔係formal野
口語啲 The blue shirt man 都得啦
再近代啲有啲memes味
可以話The blue shirt man is a lihkg andy
xxxxx andy 類似中文 xxx 仔/佬/ 撚
就變成 個藍衫男人係連登仔

use fucking simple active voice

多啲用 with / without 就慳返好多字

反而覺得
有時自己都睇漏/錯白痴嘢
有舊幫手審下稿
好過自己花時間 proof read

我大學寫essay谷字數嘅秘笈比你公開左

直接用Lihkg member呢
少個of

how？

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