發現自己寫英文好累贅，可以點改善？

屌有聲

我覺得係要練語感問題啫
set loose比較多用黎講放生動物
就咁講released都會自然啲

我可能會大概咁寫，不過唔知有無get錯你意思
After serving their time in prisons, many released convicts tend to commit crimes again. The right government measures could effectively minimize the problem.

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i go to school by bus

真係濕鳩黎

香港英文係越長越好

係

其實我都係朝早搭車求其諗出黎，個重點係話俾人知我啲野有幾累贅

我都唔知幾時開始寫野會不斷重覆啲濕鳩野

calvin sun絕技

語感 grammar同配詞都要重新學過

我自己寫之前諗清楚想講咩先 同埋盡量同simple sentence (SVO) , 選詞愈簡單愈好

i go to school by bus得2
下面嗰段先有5**

The government should launch new schemes to address the issue that many criminals commit a crime again after jailing

仲有要用字用得好深先叫叻

都可以 但要留意formality/casualness
樓主其實留意得好好 spoken English 要casual地用得好係難過寫correct english
formal english反而係比較易寫 香港人學開

係加入法律界嘅材料

下面個段錯grammar，唔會係5**

好乜鬼好嘅就唔使攪到而家咁

我諗應該冇問題嘅，通順就得