【英文求救：懷念事頭婆】咁樣翻譯「民心所向」有冇錯?

P牌無得正評添 支持下

大家一齊俾意見，唔好只是識笑鳩樓主

碌番上少少啦柒頭

其實佢好臭串
真係好正

goal!!!1-0

樓主咪不恥下問
邊忽懶叻

I’m here to memorize the greatest leader in the world(Queen Elizabeth II).
As you can see, there is a lot of people come here to pay their last respect.
It shows how people stay together with the Queen’s spirit.
我都認我英文差
但屌我既幾個巴打
又有無意見俾到呀？
咪又係得個屌字

太直譯

笑撚死
個post個標題頭四隻字已經寫撚住"英文求救"
然後一入到黎就即刻見到有人屌樓主英文
心諗做乜鳩

前面有兩句

If I’m not allowed to come for condolence today, I’ll come back tomorrow.

鍾太冇用到「伊利沙伯二世」個字眼，但鍾太話「這偉大的領袖」所以我先用括號加上 Queen Elizabeth II 比人易明

但如果由抽括號咗 Queen Elizabeth II 出來，感覺好背離鍾太原句

你咁樣就冇人會屌你
譯得幾好

意譯其實捉重點就得，主要係俾公眾知「偉大嘅領袖」係邊個。唔洗跟捉，不過你咁譯都冇問題

好過樓主用remember

岩岩行住番工邊得閒打咁多字
坐低先慢慢打啦

From the bottom of our hearts？

佢識就唔開po問啦

其實我覺得都ok啊
真係有咁差咩
語文旨在溝通 我明佢意思 係到吹毛求疵 好似有啲多餘

建議唔好中譯英字幕呢種思維
你消化下佢講咩，再用英文講出黎

好似第一句咁

我目的係黎呢度悼念
你直接寫my goal is to … here ….

其實寫 here to express grief and deepest condolences to the royal family 會更好

最基本唔好錯singular/plural agreement先啦