香港大學生GPA冇3真係唔好見人 唔好搵工

成個語景錯晒，邊有英文會咁講，真心建議打翻中文email，粵語其實唔cheap

其實third hon可以點洗底

on9 仔先讀咁多書

中學生先會好似你咁寫野

其實個名點讀

何君堯，EQ

其實人地段野 除左啲typo 大致係冇錯

開咗名唔係

請個FG都要director睇😂😂間公司都幾細….

即係代表你平時寫得少，少同人溝通
唔識簡單表達
變左愈長愈多野又臃腫
中學生常犯

By now, the most obvious error is the possessive form of you as in "your interest" and "your GPA".

Other than that,

1. Please advise me on your GPA.

2. I am not sure whether I have read it correctly.

3. Poor writing style and business etiquettes throughout the email.

My view:

Your college transcript does not tell the whole picture about you as a person. Its merely an indicator of your capability to absorb new knowledge in a schooling context.

Yes, anything below a 3.0 is sucky from HK human resources perspective but you could be well under genuine extenuating circumstances for which your transcript can never show.

I believe the Director clear knew about that but his/her writing is terrible enough to offend a reasonably educated person.

有啲老闆係咁，成日想拋窒啲新仔，自己又冇料係威係勢。