[眾籌]大鍋!日文嗰張錯Grammar!!!!

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2019-06-26 04:33:18
你不如直接寫Hongkongjin fighting chuugoku.
2019-06-26 04:35:29
其實你日文廣告加英文做咩?
2019-06-26 04:40:45
唔知班友哪來的自信。

英文唔掂就搵多啲人比意見同proof read嘛
2019-06-26 04:50:05
push
2019-06-26 04:53:00
2019-06-26 05:18:38
就咁fighting for what we deserve就得啦
越簡單越易明人地先會有印象
2019-06-26 05:35:18
Push
2019-06-26 05:35:44
push
2019-06-26 05:38:09
其實無乜問題 真心
2019-06-26 05:41:45
2019-06-26 06:14:40
推啊屌
2019-06-26 06:20:17
revolt
2019-06-26 06:21:33
咁解都會有問題
因為個for係conjunction
而唔係prepostition

只有當for作為prepostition,先會係解because of (為了)
當for作為conjunction,佢只會係解because (因為)

而because後面,係一定要跟一個clause (Subject+noun)
what we deserve就明顯唔係一個clause,佢只係一個phrase (得Subject)

we resist, for what we deserve.
如果個for用作conjunction,for=because
就變成we resist, becasue what we deserve. (???????)

但上面都講咗
resist唔會跟for (preposition)
所以we resist for what we deserve.都係錯

日本人英文真係唔太好
所以建議最好改吓
2019-06-26 06:31:33
2019-06-26 06:35:41
Fight / strive
2019-06-26 06:36:04
Pish
2019-06-26 06:52:34
2019-06-26 06:53:42
第一份已經7左喇
2019-06-26 07:04:41
推 - 讚成改fight for what we deserve
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