其實點解咁多ugrad香港人接受到打自己嗰種「英文」

會唔會due to concerns for problems blabla...會好d

除非你寫緊一份篇幅幾長嘅email/或者summarise番遇到嘅問題，如果唔係receivers 日日收咁多emails, 唔會見到你個名就記得aforementioned嘅問題姐係咩問題
最常見嘅aforementioned用法喺開頭講下嗰個係問題，之後開新段regarding the aforementioned issue, we bla bla 咁樣

Para 1: sum up the problems
Para 2: In response, we are making the following changes

係香港人先會明明自己係錯既 都要屌人要求太高

咁你有無reply返個email話佢寫得唔好/你睇唔明 叫佢寫好啲先
如果無嘅
訓醒星期一早啲返工啦

此po已完

呢句assume咗 我哋公司可以單方面改
但係我覺得原句嘅意思係request對方改嘢

同埋做嘢係唔可以認錯 冇"question" 冇"problem"
同埋 如果單方面想改嘢 應該要扮好小事

We would like to request minor adjustments based on our previous discussion.

咁你又太誇張

LM 學嘢

Our company puts your satisfactory the very first place.

Regarding to your recent feedback on XXXX, our company would make the following changes:

To address the issue you mentioned previously, we would like to make the following changes:
1)
2)
比我會咁寫

Regarding to your question that raised last time, we would like to make below changes......

利申: 英文垃圾

有冇實例？

We want to make changes because we concern for the problems that relate to the questions you asking last time

LM 學嘢

Our company puts your satisfactory the very first place.

Regarding to your recent feedback on XXXX, our company would make the following changes:

Satisfaction 自膠

誇張？問吓你自己，對上一次完完整整睇完一本英文書係幾時？港燦寫英文，就算文法啱晒都硬係有陣港燦味，有幾多料心照啦！

Please be noted that....

上星期

你話事啦

至憎水蛇春咁長既email
有咩電話傾 開會面對面傾

email有咁簡短得咁簡短
淨係睇你封email咩
浪費人生

咩書先？

In light with the discussion last time, we will change our decision subject to your advice. Kindly let us know if you have further comments.

Further to our last discussion, we would like to propose the following changes to address your concerns [e.g.on the timing] (note: 可以寫埋address左d咩concern，個客未必記得傾左乜):
1. XXXX
2. XXXX etc

其實樓上好多巴打都寫得幾好。
同埋冇話岩定錯，不過最好簡潔d 同分段落

formal 唔係 passive voice 好啲咩

e.g. xxxxx is suggested

passive voice 係得正苦同audit 狗 (某d老屎忽鍾意)先用

出到commercial world d人根本唔care，我而家老細直頭叫我唔好用passive voice.

你提到果個"I suggest" 想客氣d 可以用 "What do you think about [你既 suggestion]" 或者 "You may want to consider XXXX"