其實點解咁多ugrad香港人接受到打自己嗰種「英文」

主要係句式太累贅。because 後面既野好難明。我用返一樣既字試下：
You asked some questions last time. This concerns us to think about the problems. We want to make changes.

我master grad

we change, you problem

1.) Concern唔係咁用
2.) Aforementioned令到件事好confusing，你後面已經講咗last meeting，你個aforementioned只會令人覺得last meeting有幾個problems，而家你而家想講個problem係你個email上面有提過
3.) 係都要用aforementioned都唔該畀返個the佢

The question you asking都唔係錯grammar咩

In response to your enquiry, we would like to make changes.

好wordy
我可能會就咁
Amendment has been made according to your suggestion in our last meeting

Sor will be 先岩
睇錯以為搞掂覆人

We’re making these changes based on the problems you mentioned last time

應該係紅色特大字 ENDS 咁做ending
某政府職系老人家好鍾意咁樣做endling

仲有啲濕鳩英文：－
I should be grateful /
Thank you for your kind assistance in advance /
For your consideration / perusal / approval /
Nil return will be assumed / is necessary／
Your prompt reply will be much appreciated

仲有無敵大絕：
Please speak ／ Please deal with it expeditiously /
For your necessary follow-up action

就咁the problem 或者 mentioned previously 算啦

我覺得冇乜所謂 返工send email都係為溝通 大家都香港人睇得明咪得
利申英文系

i love you

所以你咪覺得自己啱

又講 中學根本好少請教院 同埋冇5以上都好少可會請你
究竟有幾多個屌教師冇料既連登仔係真係知而家教育界係點運作

關係唔大=/=完全無關係

強調russell group

仲有The problems that relate to
一句錯兩個位都叫唔大