【 突發】根據投稿Financial Times經驗,緊急幫手修改G20登報公開信!希望略盡綿力!

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2019-06-25 17:18:55
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2019-06-25 17:19:21
to establish an independent commission under the legislature to investigate the misconducts of the Hong Kong Police Force

to establish an effective and independent authority monitoring the acts of Hong Kong Police Force and handle complaints against the Police in long term, instead of the existing system which the Police investigate complaints internally
2019-06-25 17:19:55
如果有圖係咪最好灰色之後得一個顏色,例好嗰個胡椒噴霧黃色雨褸, 剩係得黃色雨褸有色, 其他黑白會唔會好 eye catching 呢,otherwise, 就係紅....有邊個流血嘅相
2019-06-25 17:20:02
我改左個draft,唔知你地仲黎唔黎得切edit


Dear World,

We are a group of concerned citizens among the 2 million protestors marching on the streets of Hong Kong on June 16. This is our sincere plead for your support for our fight for freedom and justice.

The Hong Kong Government proposed a bill that would allow the extradition of alleged “fugitives” from Hong Kong to China, where the judiciary is controlled by an authoritarian party-state that has a notorious record of human rights violations. If the bill is passed, anyone who visits or resides in Hong Kong can be arrested and sent to China for trials. Let us not forget that the overall conviction rate in China's opaque courtrooms is 99.9%.

By protesting against the bill, we are trying to safeguard the rights and safety of not only the citizens of Hong Kong but also the people of other nationalities who come here to work, study, or travel. We took to the streets unarmed with only helmets and umbrellas, but we were suppressed with 150 shots of tear gases on June 12. Some were beaten up by police batons; some were shot in the head by rubber bullets and bean bag rounds. Numerous protestors were unjustifiably characterized as “rioters”, when all they did was to participate in a peaceful protest to speak up against a government that has failed to represent our voice.

Hong Kong’s autonomy from the influence of China has been increasingly deteriorating since the handover of the city from British to Chinese rule in 1997. We appeal for your support as Hong Kong struggles to resist the political and legal encroachment of an authoritarian China.
2019-06-25 17:20:37
200萬人
爭取嘅係撤回修例
難怪白人笑你班垃圾黃種劣等基因垃圾了
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如果要登全版想eyecatching又震撼,可以試試呢個。Text =公開信內容
2019-06-25 17:21:42
push
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Push
2019-06-25 17:23:11
不如搵廣告界幫手
全部字我驚冇乜人睇
2019-06-25 17:23:11
2019-06-25 17:23:19
推左先睇
2019-06-25 17:23:55
如果要登全版想eyecatching又震撼,可以試試呢個。Text =公開信內容
2019-06-25 17:24:13
攬炒巴
2019-06-25 17:24:14
正想講,全字其實幾悶
2019-06-25 17:25:21

如果張圖咁樣會唔會eye catching? 要揾photoshop 高手搞
2019-06-25 17:25:41
一係試下FB搵徐緣
佢尋日先話廣告界要做返啲野
應該肯幫手
2019-06-25 17:26:05
Push
2019-06-25 17:26:08
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同意
推!
2019-06-25 17:26:32
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