1. 你有兩個問題
第一的確唔夠immersive. 可以好似我咁跟住一句一句講
immersive係將自己深度浸淫喺個語境入面,grammar, sentence structure, style, accent,所有野都學到,不限口音
第二,睇你writing 同speaking差應該係你缺乏表達能力
practice speaking and writing a lot, and focus on achieving 3 goals:
a. express your idea in a clear manner
b. being able to speak on a topic continuously, non stop, for at least 30 minutes
c. get a lot of expressive vocabulary like adjectives. it will do you wonders
2. 組織結構係講緊你成篇文既框架佈局,例如寫一個proposal你會用分別用幾多篇幅交代背境、敍述問題成因、提出方案等等。而你講既句子結構同vocab唔係篇文既organization 問題而係language
3. 好問題
背生字我會叫我既學生一日三個,不能多不能少
但呢三個每個都要係有用,要令佢變成你既active vocabulary, 融入左喺你既語言既一部份,好自然可以用番出黎,而唔係好似大陸仔咁背字典學幾千個passive vocabulary被考試時明白意思但冇辦法主動使用
具體方法係今晚揀三個字,先查字典了解佢既定義,再直接google呢個字,會搵到一大堆text入面包含呢個字,你就會知道how people use this word in real life
And in the next day when you go about your day, try to actively use these 3 words in your speaking, thinking and writing as much as possible. This way your brain will make a lot of connections between these words and your daily life. And they will become your own words.
Hope you find these useful
