DGX團隊計劃利用音樂, 文化,的力量
去接觸並連結國際上既普羅大眾,
並令外國政府支援hk更有人民認受性 & 逼切性
眾籌方面已取得進展, 而家開始英文歌詞集思廣益
BGM: (唔明點唱拉去底, 聽廣東話版)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7qZ9agGxR2I
主題:
用香港人追求自由民主既經歷去感動人 , 反思 > 珍惜自己權利
可以用貼地, 生活化既野做切入點
令聽眾有投入感, 設身處地 > 對hk伸出援手
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歡迎各位提供任何意見去改
歌詞初稿:
(Hyphens denote meliasma.)
A1
‘Why the tears?’ said a young girl at the junction to her friend.
As raindrops fall upon their silhouette,
My window tinkles on as if to ask,
‘Will you, or not, take her in your arms?’
A2
‘Take my hand.’ Those words echo through my mind, my memory.
I shut my eyes and yet her voice remains,
No hiding from all those regrets of mine,
‘Will you, or not, take me in your arms?’
B1
In that little box that she has left
Sits her rusty sword and broken sca-les.
Was it you or me who’s blindfolded all along?
Matters not now — far too late to judge my hands.
C1
There comes a time when everybody must decide in their minds
Whether to stand or to hide,
To absolve my sins and to lend my hand when I dared not before.
What passed is past! Let not the darkness cloud my heart, as I carve:
‘Tomorrow there’s a new start.
With her, walk on, walk on.’
A3
‘Call my name,’ said the young girl to my ears on tha-t day.
Oh how I wish that this our Sto-ry
Unending too like how the Empress was.
‘Will you, or not, call her by your name?’
B2
In that little box that she has left
Sits her rusty sword and broken sca-les,
And a little note in her own hand saying it’s
‘Up to you now —
Let nobody judge your hands.’
C2
There comes a time when everybody must believe despite all
The damning words you receive,
And now with her gifts I decide to walk her path for evermore.
What passed is past! Let all the darkness now be gone, as I find
In all my dreams a new dawn.
‘For her, walk on, walk on.’
C3
‘There comes a time when everybody must decide what to do
When all your dreams seem to die.’
And so left the young girl who at the junction said these words to me.
Break now the dawn, as all the dark clouds in the skies are all gone,
My fate, my hands, my own path.
‘I shall walk on, walk on.’
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個人對初稿意見:
好多細節位可以改靚D, 有想像空間d
例如 to her friend ,
said these words to me
可以改做留多d幻想空間既歌詞,
歌詞通常少講呢D細節野
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可以參考廣東話版睇點樣唱
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hc-svgxbJ50
眾籌連結:
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