(I posted in the pretty old link. Let me post again here)
At the end of this wonderful song, I feel like it ends too soon.
Hopefully music can be prolonged a little further and let voices to repeat the meaningful phrase at the end! Building up the mood of grand finale with all sorts of percussion and brass, the music can show the world how much compassion and determination HK people have for the future !
So, here are my thoughts - a few bars of coda after bar 36.
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Hopefully it makes some sense to you.
For instrumental version, if possible, it will be great if you can add even longer ending ( coda?) , powerful, and grand finale using various percussions and brass.
On both versions, it will be wonderful if all singers and players can keep the climax all the way to the last second of the song and do not let the dynamics sink even a bit in the last few bars.
Hope it helps and you like the idea.
Since you have already done a lot of work and prep, I am not sure if my thoughts are coming too late....