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CY Leung claimed that each familymore or lessonly needs to wait for around 3 years for the public housing estate, but thenewestlatest public housing waiting list unveiled last week points out that the average waiting time of the public housing estate for each family is 4.5 years, which is far more than what CY Leung claimed. The government doesn't provide the renting subsidy to the disadvantages since the authority don’t want to obstruct the residential property market and Hong Kong government advocates “Big market, small government ”,. Therefore, it is inevitable that the low-income group willforcemake do with the subdivided flats inside the industrial building.
To me, I think the government should legalize the subdivided flats and allow some business operate inside the industrial building. To prevent the tragedy stage again, the authority should do the spot checks more often,to make sure all the subdivided flats, shopsareobeying the safety rules and have enoughfireworksfire service equipment at each floor. Also, the government should make sure the industrial building is accord with Buildings Ordinance that is stipulated by related bureau.
The aforementionedisare only the short-run methods,. What the government should do is to boost the supply of public housing estate andconsider toprovide some renting subsidies to reduce public housing waiting list.
Even though the city becomes more prosperous,that GDP per capita in 2016 is more than $40000 USD, there is still a part ofthecitizens living in such subdivided houses and face monetary predicament.it is absurdity and lamentable.I hope the government should tackle this absurd and lamentable issue at once and don’t let this issuebecomedeteriorate.
臨訓前望望 只睇左少少 未必改得岩 戴戴頭盔先
Due to the space constraints and soaring rent, some business move+d intotheindustrial building+s.There isa table tennis training school whichwasis located in Tai Waiareis beingsuedused by the authority of breaching the land law and safety (?) We may think Law is the law, all of usneed tohave to obey the law, but don’t forgetthisthe training school has trained (about)300 table tennis playersand. Some of them have represented Hong Kong to take part in some national competitions. Moreover, our government always advocate+s (?)the sport development andcravingcraves for the talented athletes. At the end of the day, this training school isbenefiticailbeneficial to our society and it deserves +for more resourcesspared prosecution.
CY Leung claim +ed that each familymore or less only need tohave to wait for 3 years for the public housing estate
CY Leung claims each family more or less only need to waitfor3 years forthepublic housing estate, but the newest public housing waiting list unveiled last week point out that the average waiting time ofthepublic housing estate for each family is 4.5 years, which is far more than what CY Leung claim. The government doesn't providetherenting subsidy to the disadvantages since the authority don’t want to obstruct the residential property market and Hong Kong government advocates “Big market, small government ”, it is inevitable that the low-income group will force the subdivided flats insidetheindustrial building.
What CY Leung claim可以用claims或者claimed.
...provide renting subsidy to the disadvantages since...嚟句,我對disadvantages嘅理解應該係受害嘅人?咁嘅話用sufferer或者victim應該會比較好。
...the low-income group will force the subdivided flats inside...嚟度講咗低收入群強逼工廠大廈入面嘅劏房...做咩呢?
A fatal blaze at a subdivided flat on last Saturday was provoked an extensive debate whether or not to legalize the subdivided flat in industrial building and allow some business operate intheindustrial building.
A fatal blaze at a subdivided flat on last Saturday was provoked an extensive debate whether or not to legalize the subdivided flat in industrial building and allow some business operate intheindustrial building.
點解係was provoked 唔係
had provoked/has provoked/ provoked
was provoked 個意思唔係相反左咩
乜唔係講緊provoke左個debate
was provoke咪係provoke左個blaze
利申純討論
英文廢柴無覺得自己一定啱
To prevent the tragedy stage again, the authority should do the spot checks more often,
Stage係有預謀, 用happen都足夠
Should do spot checks -> should inspect
臨訓前望望 只睇左少少 未必改得岩 戴戴頭盔先
Due to the space constraints and soaring rent, some business move+d intotheindustrial building+s.There isa table tennis training school whichwasis located in Tai Waiareis beingsuedused by the authority of breaching the land law and safety (?) We may think Law is the law, all of usneed tohave to obey the law, but don’t forgetthisthe training school has trained (about)300 table tennis playersand. Some of them have represented Hong Kong to take part in some national competitions. Moreover, our government always advocate+s (?)the sport development andcravingcraves for the talented athletes. At the end of the day, this training school isbenefiticailbeneficial to our society and it deserves +for more resourcesspared prosecution.
CY Leung claim +ed that each familymore or less only need tohave to wait for 3 years for the public housing estate
A fatal blaze at a subdivided flat on last Saturday was provoked an extensive debate whether or not to legalize the subdivided flat in industrial building and allow some business operate intheindustrial building.
點解係was provoked 唔係
had provoked/has provoked/ provoked
was provoked 個意思唔係相反左咩
乜唔係講緊provoke左個debate
was provoke咪係provoke左個blaze
利申純討論
英文廢柴無覺得自己一定啱
A fatal blaze at a subdivided flat on last Saturday was provoked an extensive debate whether or not to legalize the subdivided flat in industrial building and allow some business operate intheindustrial building.
點解係was provoked 唔係
had provoked/has provoked/ provoked
was provoked 個意思唔係相反左咩
乜唔係講緊provoke左個debate
was provoke咪係provoke左個blaze
利申純討論
英文廢柴無覺得自己一定啱
因為provoke嚟個字本身係解“招惹”,
如果用主動句就會邊做“場大火去招惹議論”,
所以用被動式“場大火惹來議論”。
has provoked係以前有議論,依家冇咗。
had provoked就係依家都有,都可以用。
A fatal blaze at a subdivided flat on last Saturday was provoked an extensive debate whether or not to legalize the subdivided flat in industrial building and allow some business operate intheindustrial building.
點解係was provoked 唔係
had provoked/has provoked/ provoked
was provoked 個意思唔係相反左咩
乜唔係講緊provoke左個debate
was provoke咪係provoke左個blaze
利申純討論
英文廢柴無覺得自己一定啱
因為provoke嚟個字本身係解“招惹”,
如果用主動句就會邊做“場大火去招惹議論”,
所以用被動式“場大火惹來議論”。
has provoked係以前有議論,依家冇咗。
had provoked就係依家都有,都可以用。
To prevent the tragedy stage again, the authority should do the spot checks more often,
Stage係有預謀, 用happen都足夠
Should do spot checks -> should inspect
俾我會就咁to prevent the tragedy
不過我個人覺得spot check 同inspection 意思不太一樣
A fatal blaze at a subdivided flat on last Saturday was provoked an extensive debate whether or not to legalize the subdivided flat in industrial building and allow some business operate intheindustrial building.
點解係was provoked 唔係
had provoked/has provoked/ provoked
was provoked 個意思唔係相反左咩
乜唔係講緊provoke左個debate
was provoke咪係provoke左個blaze
利申純討論
英文廢柴無覺得自己一定啱
因為provoke嚟個字本身係解“招惹”,
如果用主動句就會邊做“場大火去招惹議論”,
所以用被動式“場大火惹來議論”。
has provoked係以前有議論,依家冇咗。
had provoked就係依家都有,都可以用。
To prevent the tragedy stage again, the authority should do the spot checks more often,
Stage係有預謀, 用happen都足夠
Should do spot checks -> should inspect
俾我會就咁to prevent the tragedy
不過我個人覺得spot check 同inspection 意思不太一樣
我自己會咁寫:
to prevent the reoccurrence of tragedy
因為重點係 "再次"
另外, 由於係去某特定地點, 所以應該用巡查 (inspection), 而抽查(spot-checks)我個人覺得無咁合適
如果想加上spot 既意思, 可以用random inspection
A fatal blaze at a subdivided flat on last Saturday was provoked an extensive debate whether or not to legalize the subdivided flat in industrial building and allow some business operate intheindustrial building.
點解係was provoked 唔係
had provoked/has provoked/ provoked
was provoked 個意思唔係相反左咩
乜唔係講緊provoke左個debate
was provoke咪係provoke左個blaze
利申純討論
英文廢柴無覺得自己一定啱
因為provoke嚟個字本身係解“招惹”,
如果用主動句就會邊做“場大火去招惹議論”,
所以用被動式“場大火惹來議論”。
has provoked係以前有議論,依家冇咗。
had provoked就係依家都有,都可以用。
To prevent the tragedy stage again, the authority should do the spot checks more often,
Stage係有預謀, 用happen都足夠
Should do spot checks -> should inspect
俾我會就咁to prevent the tragedy
不過我個人覺得spot check 同inspection 意思不太一樣
我自己會咁寫:
to prevent the reoccurrence of tragedy
因為重點係 "再次"
另外, 由於係去某特定地點, 所以應該用巡查 (inspection), 而抽查(spot-checks)我個人覺得無咁合適
如果想加上spot 既意思, 可以用random inspection
如果講方法嚟講我諗係要random check 先有效
我估作者都係咁既意思掛
不過當然呢個唔係重點
都係討論下姐