TVB發聲明澄清有關2024香港小姐合約問題

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The English part of the statement is generally clear and well-written, but there are a few minor grammatical and stylistic improvements that could enhance its clarity and readability. Here are some detailed suggestions:

1. **Date Format and Punctuation:**
- "05th July, 2024" should be "5th July 2024" (without the comma).
- Adjust spacing around the dash.

2. **Opening Sentence:**
- "Recent media coverage related to the registrants of 'Miss Hong Kong 2024'." can be made into a complete sentence: "Recent media coverage has raised concerns related to the registrants of 'Miss Hong Kong 2024'."

3. **Clarification Sentence:**
- "We hereby clarify these issues to set the record straight:" can be revised for a smoother flow: "We would like to clarify these issues to set the record straight:"

4. **Bullet Points Introduction:**
- Introduce the points more clearly: "We address the following points:"

5. **Fairness of Contracts:**
- "The Miss Hong Kong Pageant Recruitment and contract terms strictly adhere to the principles of fairness and justice, and comply with all relevant legal regulations." can be revised for conciseness: "The recruitment and contract terms for the Miss Hong Kong Pageant strictly adhere to principles of fairness and justice, complying with all relevant legal regulations."

6. **Transparency and Protection:**
- "The contract terms signed with each contestant are clear and transparent, specifically designed to fully protect the legal rights of TVB and the contestants during their participation." can be slightly rephrased: "The contract terms signed with each contestant are clear and transparent, specifically designed to fully protect the legal rights of both TVB and the contestants during their participation."

7. **Resource Dedication:**
- "We have consistently dedicated limitless resources to the Miss Hong Kong Pageant with the goal of enabling each contestant not only demonstrate team spirit and personal talent but also to highlight their beauty and elegance, representing Hong Kong at its finest moment." can be made clearer: "We have consistently dedicated limitless resources to the Miss Hong Kong Pageant, aiming to enable each contestant to demonstrate team spirit and personal talent, while also highlighting their beauty and elegance, representing Hong Kong at its finest."

8. **Platform and Principles:**
- "The Miss Hong Kong Pageant is a collaborative platform, and we have always respected freedom of speech and expected mutual respect among all parties." can be revised for clarity: "The Miss Hong Kong Pageant is a collaborative platform where we always respect freedom of speech and expect mutual respect among all parties."
- "We should not prioritize the pursuit of web traffic and increased attention in a manner that compromises the fundamental principles of the Miss Hong Kong Pageant." can be rephrased for conciseness: "We should not prioritize the pursuit of web traffic and increased attention in ways that compromise the fundamental principles of the Miss Hong Kong Pageant."

9. **Legal Actions:**
- "Regarding any false statements, our company reserves the right to pursue legal actions as necessary." can be slightly rephrased: "Regarding any false statements, our company reserves the right to pursue legal action as necessary."

成篇嘢無任何額外資訊提供過，只係不斷重申啲合約我哋覺得好撚公平並無違法成份，仲有我哋放咁多資源俾個平台你哋班發金龜夢嘅女人出名要你哋簽呢啲咁撚公平嘅合同根本就天經地義係全世界誤解我哋大台。

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無限資源？Limitless resources？有限公司？

有無 Miss HK must need to drink water think source 呢句隱藏條款？

邊會有無限資源
係嘅上年就唔使搵四個演員做司儀咁垃圾， 完全唔識搞氣氛, 真係尷尬到

應該用大量資源/Substantial resources, 無限就吹大咗啲

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