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黎梗想係泰國同女朋友求婚，想酒店幫幫手，但小弟讀書唔叻，希望各位可以幫我翻譯下面段文字為英文嗎，感謝各位

本人會於本月14號入住酒店，我想在15號晚上同女朋友求婚，希望你們可以幫我佈置一下房間，另外可否幫我準備一扎11枝紅玫瑰，可以報價給我嗎，謝謝

黎梗想係泰國同女朋友求婚，想酒店幫幫手，但小弟讀書唔叻，希望各位可以幫我翻譯下面段文字為英文嗎，感謝各位

本人會於本月14號入住酒店，我想在15號晚上同女朋友求婚，希望你們可以幫我佈置一下房間，另外可否幫我準備一扎11枝紅玫瑰，可以報價給我嗎，謝謝

Dear Sir/ Madam,
I will stay in your hotel begining from 14 Aug. I will prpose to my girlfriend on 15 Aug. Would you mind helping me to decorate my room? Please also help to prepare 11 red rose, kindly give me the price, thank you very much

Best regards,
xxx

黎梗想係泰國同女朋友求婚，想酒店幫幫手，但小弟讀書唔叻，希望各位可以幫我翻譯下面段文字為英文嗎，感謝各位

本人會於本月14號入住酒店，我想在15號晚上同女朋友求婚，希望你們可以幫我佈置一下房間，另外可否幫我準備一扎11枝紅玫瑰，可以報價給我嗎，謝謝

Dear Sir/ Madam,
I will stay in your hotel begining from 14 Aug. I will prpose to my girlfriend on 15 Aug. Would you mind helping me to decorate my room? Please also help to prepare 11 red rose, kindly give me the price, thank you very much

Best regards,
xxx

唔錯，文筆暢順，係差在唔夠formal同少許grammatical error, 我俾6/10

黎梗想係泰國同女朋友求婚，想酒店幫幫手，但小弟讀書唔叻，希望各位可以幫我翻譯下面段文字為英文嗎，感謝各位

本人會於本月14號入住酒店，我想在15號晚上同女朋友求婚，希望你們可以幫我佈置一下房間，另外可否幫我準備一扎11枝紅玫瑰，可以報價給我嗎，謝謝

Dear Sir/ Madam,
I will stay in your hotel begining from 14 Aug. I will prpose to my girlfriend on 15 Aug. Would you mind helping me to decorate my room? Please also help to prepare 11 red rose, kindly give me the price, thank you very much

Best regards,
xxx

唔錯，文筆暢順，係差在唔夠formal同少許grammatical error, 我俾6/10

唔緊要啦，睇封email果個都未必知grammar錯

黎梗想係泰國同女朋友求婚，想酒店幫幫手，但小弟讀書唔叻，希望各位可以幫我翻譯下面段文字為英文嗎，感謝各位

本人會於本月14號入住酒店，我想在15號晚上同女朋友求婚，希望你們可以幫我佈置一下房間，另外可否幫我準備一扎11枝紅玫瑰，可以報價給我嗎，謝謝

Dear Sir/ Madam,
I will stay in your hotel begining from 14 Aug. I will prpose to my girlfriend on 15 Aug. Would you mind helping me to decorate my room? Please also help to prepare 11 red rose, kindly give me the price, thank you very much

Best regards,
xxx

唔錯，文筆暢順，係差在唔夠formal同少許grammatical error, 我俾6/10

唔緊要啦，睇封email果個都未必知grammar錯

所以我都唔會執，反正我寫都係鳩寫算

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