DSE 2021 Part A Writing - the annual school fair

Good morning, everyone!
As all of you know, our annual school fair will be held between 12 p.m and 4 p.m. on 29th May on our beloved school campus. In order to celebrate the 50th anniversary our school, the theme this year is “Nostalgia”, which will allow our present students and alumni to reminisce about our glorious history.
Are you guys curious about the details of the activity? Let me tell you straight away. The school fair will kick off with a heart-stirring quiz competition between our Form 5 students and our alumni in the school hall. Attend the contest and you will know more about our origin, our evolution from a humble village college into a cradle grooming talents contributing to Hong Kong as well as our phenomenal achievements in extra-curricular activities. Want to watch a play? You won’t be disappointed! Our drama club, which is the defending champion of the Inter-school Drama competition, will showcase their superb acting skills in our play called “Inheritance”, in which our old campus during the 1970s will be recreated on the stage and our spirit of mutual support and incandescent love will be demonstrated. Sitting in the hall for two hours viewing the quiz competition and the drama, some of you will surely complain of rumbling stomach. It’s time for you to savour some refreshments. Thanks to the effort of the Cooking Club and Home Economics teachers, a makeshift tea restaurant will be built on the school basketball court, where you can taste the egg tarts and pineapple buns prepared by our students and sip milk tea as well as coffee made by our teachers. Still not satisfied? You can pamper your eyes through viewing the outstanding works meticulously prepared by our Visual Arts students. In these masterpieces, you can view comics detailing the old days of our beloved school and vivid portraits featuring our teachers, who have been working painstakingly to enhance our all-round development.

With a view to ensuring the smooth organization of the school fair, volunteers are now being recruited. No matter which form you are studying in, you are cordially invited to become the ambassadors welcoming the guests at the entrance and the corridor, helpers of booths and the hosts of the quiz competition as well as the play. With the pandemic of Covid-19 still threatening Hong Kong, special arrangements have been made. Implementing the social distancing measures required by the government, we have set a quota of 200 attendees who can visit our campus. In the meantime, the quiz competition and the drama will be broadcast live on our school website and YouTube. Students who excel in multimedia are now invited to help out.
As you can see, our school fair is such a meaningful activity especially as we are celebrating our 50th anniversary. Let’s immerse ourselves in the wonderland of nostalgia on 29th May. Paying only 10 dollars, you can bring one of your friends or family members to witness the glorious history of our school. Don’t hesitate and sign up for the event via chriswong@hkbs.edu.hk. Thanks for listening!

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題目表面易但攞高分唔易
好容易浄係抄曬題目提供嘅活動
缺乏詳細解釋
應該要用6何法解釋人物、地點、舉辦詳情
另一樣學生好可能會犯嘅問題
係各活動之間無聯繋
最好有1個中心主題串連所有活動
例如上文用嘅nostalgia(懷舊）

上年考過lv3
自己都知文法寫到成Pat屎咁

今年執返好少少文法
Part a寫咗兩版，但內容好差
Part b寫左三版，我覺得發揮正常
有機會博到lv4