DSE 作文Introduction 求評二

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2023-01-29 18:13:01


Have you ever wondered why Asian singers and movie stars are popular in Western countries?Perhaps it is fueled by cultural differences.In recent years, Asia style like Korea is becoming increasingly commonplace.It is not unusual to see people like following stars and buy the star merchandise whom they like. However, other Non-Asian stars' popularity demonstrated a drop in the phenomenon. Therefore, some pointed out that this popular by no means a good culture promotional, which would menace their local culture. Despite of the various polarised comments from the general public, I qualify pointed out that Asian culture will not be bane in the Western countries. This article will illustrate how Asia culture benefits in Western countries from 3 perspectives, including X,Y and Z

能否Lv 2
2023-01-29 18:20:35
咪玩la
2023-01-29 18:21:40
點解要it is not unusual 兜咁多個圈
2023-01-29 18:22:53
應該舉返嘅實例 寫幾個亞洲女明星例子落去就實5 星星 例如河北彩花 三上悠雅 橋本有菜
2023-01-29 18:24:08
Full stop 後面加space都唔識 食屎啦
2023-01-29 18:26:03
其實有lv3
2023-01-29 18:26:26

2023-01-29 19:51:19
淨係望intro 應該有level 2 或以上 但係feel到好明顯用罐頭句堆砌成個框架出黎 變相句與句之間少少唔自然
2023-01-29 22:14:32
100% canned phrasesPaper 2重點係文筆要natural,一睇就知你係死背定有料

利申paper 2 5**
2023-01-29 22:35:25
係canned phrases
個細路1月果陣仲交緊白卷
我目標係要佢DSE有寫字咋
2023-01-29 22:41:34
即係文就我哋睇,補習錢就你收?
2023-01-29 23:12:00

我教econ的
係客串埋writing
2023-01-30 09:19:44
係咁用啲背既vocab但granmar錯晒
2023-01-30 09:22:44
審題同邏輯都麻麻地
人地問點解Asian stars are gaining popularity
你就話有Non-asian stars都紅 所以asian stars就唔係gaining popularity?
我諗都有4既
2都冇就誇咗啲
2023-01-30 09:24:47
屌 原來我睇錯自膠
不過都係搞好grammar先
vocab其實幾好
2023-01-30 13:21:14
我睇死個細路都係google translate 俾我架la
2023-01-30 23:36:52
咁你都係有收錢
2023-02-01 04:23:16
建議現階段唔好背罐頭句式速成啦..
搞清楚個學生有冇能力應付不同作文題目,及/或英文水平夠唔夠啦
兩樣都要訓練,識得分析、聯想到例子,起碼有個方向點樣寫;
然後再教佢可以怎樣用英文表達,開頭由佢用住clingish 再執返grammar, S-V-O 個啲
2023-02-01 04:46:38
2023-02-01 13:41:10
幫細妹問
巴打,係咪用natural English 而冇grammatical mistakes 好過上面佢咁寫?
2023-02-01 15:02:35
2023-02-01 20:20:39
Thx 巴打
2023-02-08 20:57:06
article要唔要寫voices of two sides
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