小學英文通告文法錯漏百出　家長狠批︰無信心俾老師教仔女

always actively encourages
呢3隻字併埋一齊已經諗到佢原來句中文係點

It has been encouraged that student could be joined charity activities on their free time.

班家長妄想呢個年代仲係只有老師出通告

係得香港人先咁在意Grammer

錯到….不過宜家啲人啲英文
又的確同回歸前差好遠….

我覺得本身係中譯英 而學校中文不嬲多廢話
第一句就係我校一直鼓勵學生參加慈善活動

我個時只係諗點解raised後面會加動詞is，後來先醒起raised係動詞變形容詞去形容amount，is係主句動詞，我要入堆田區了

always係副詞後面加多個副詞有咩問題

Grammer nazi

成日比錢上youtube賣廣告，點廢法？

always本身係帶有好強情感色彩

呀媽係女人都要寫既 唔係就無頭無尾

劣改 英文差

Our school has always encouraged students to participate in charity activities. This year's "Community Chest Casual Day" has successfully concluded. The total amount of donations received was HK$3,407 (the amounts received from each class are listed in on the attached page)

The school is very grateful for all the donations received. Receipts will only be issued for donations of HK$100 or more. For enquiries, please contact Ms. Cheng Yut Or Zuck Ei Dik. Thank you for your kind attention.

F7都懶

其實可以直接 “Our school encourages students…”
加咁多嘢做咩
斷估個老師直譯「我地學校一直主動鼓勵學生」

明明寫得唔錯，但你都收到兩個負評
連登真係冇咩人識字

講呢啲把撚咩，共產黨都唔會再放資源喺香港啦
放都係放俾佢哋啲「精英」嘅子弟，就係直接去外國讀
你唔係以為香港仲可以有任何進步呀嘛？

你班撚屌集非成是姐

啲濕鳩家長用個錯既改人地個岩
最岸鳩係個寫稿佬

根本係Google Translate

社會主義都可以有中國特色
咁英文通告都可以有港式風格架