小學英文通告文法錯漏百出 家長狠批︰無信心俾老師教仔女

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2021-11-18 23:41:13
No, I don't mind
2021-11-18 23:45:49
佢可能真係mind
2021-11-18 23:50:23
好正常喎
我公司email都係寫慣passive voice
2021-11-18 23:52:19
It has been encouraged that students might be / could be xxxx咪幾好 format english
2021-11-19 00:00:21
咁咪即係講個刻開始就唔鼓勵
2021-11-19 00:06:16
不是的:

The present perfect tense can also be used to talk about an action which began some time in the past and has continued up to the present.
e.g.
I have always wanted to learn the art of painting.
We have lived in this city for several years.
I haven’t seen him for a long time.
2021-11-19 00:10:10
係既咩?
利申80後 不嬲寫文都係用passive voice
oral就當然唔會咁講啦
2021-11-19 00:12:45
咁我想問 依家中學生仲有無用passive voice作文?

還是全部都 I xx開頭?
2021-11-19 00:18:06
拿當日BNO pathway個announcement, 幾乎全active voice
係用好簡單既英文,完全唔洗查字典

樓上果d人話咩formal就要用passive voice既... 可能佢地會覺得UK home office既announcement唔算太formal所以home office唔洗用passive voice
https://www.gov.uk/government/news/home-secretary-announces-details-of-the-hong-kong-bno-visa
2021-11-19 00:20:01
依家教書阿豬阿狗都做得
2021-11-19 00:22:28
就咁always會唔會好D

利伸 英文F
2021-11-19 00:22:38
Encourage嘅意思係
1) ”to make (someone) more determined, hopeful, or confident”
2) “to make (something) more appealing or more likely to happen”
3) “to make (someone) more likely to do something”


Actively嘅意思係
“in a way that involves positive action”


Encourage已經會involve positive action (make someone more likely to do something),啫係重複咗encourage嘅意思。

試下嗰6句唔要actively,睇下會唔會改變咗文章意思?
2021-11-19 00:24:23
老師同TA啲分別有時只係好彩同唔好彩
英文可能差唔遠
2021-11-19 00:25:01
咁我三十幾歲都係學以前d英國英文
原來依家英國佬都學美國英文了
2021-11-19 00:26:56
The 後面唔應該加 s
2021-11-19 00:27:16
又係到捉grammar
就係d咁嘅劣根性
搞到人人唔敢講英文
唔該望下印度人非洲人啦
講英文唔洗100%岩grammar同讀音架
2021-11-19 00:37:12
你個example同一個男人分手時同佢女朋友講”I have loved you”一樣,即係已經完結
2021-11-19 00:43:27
其他grammar 野唔講,資質既野
但最後個打錯字勁明顯,只要有double check 或者有人review 一定會發現呢點直晴管理有問題
2021-11-19 00:46:12
其實就冇話always一定要用喺present tense
2021-11-19 00:47:35
As an admin myself, I would be meticulous since we are dealing with hk parents.

Some suggestions below (and these are by no means authoritative):

1. At XXX (school name), we are committed to promoting the awareness of eye health in the local community.

2. With your unswerving stewardship towards Orbis mission, we have raised HK$3,000 in donation to the cause of saving blind lives in Orbis World Sight Day 2021. (A further breakdown of the donation by each class is attached for your ease of reference.)

3. In acknowledgement of your generosity, those with a donation amount of HK$100 or more will be issued 1. an official receipt for tax filing purposes; and 2. a thematic pin designed by Orbis as a token of appreciation for your donation (which has been distributed to the student direct via their home room teachers).

4. May we thank once again all those who participated in this fundraiser.

5. For enquiries, please contact XXX (the original sentence is right!)
2021-11-19 00:48:25
definite article
咪衝出嚟柒
2021-11-19 00:49:35
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