小學英文通告文法錯漏百出　家長狠批︰無信心俾老師教仔女

如果全年幾個fundraising activities先籌得三千蚊 都幾乞米下

係咩?
冇讀書好多年. 睇慣公司email. 都係寫passive voice多

裝返個grammarly 好d

公告要懶振奮人心
所以外國人都會咁寫的

成篇嘢係咁our school our school the school開頭好柒，好多位根本就應該用passive voice省略咗our school

利申：ielts 寫作得6.5

thanks巴打

我都仲係睇緊英語一分鐘，我覺得又冇講錯，一句又singular 又plural就唔得
https://podcast.rthk.hk/podcast/item.php?pid=195&eid=6852&year=2009&lang=zh-CN

我講整體香港人心態唔係咩公文錯唔錯得呢啲低層次野，你話平時溝通唔重grammar，其實都幾肯定唔係，連新聞都有講過呢樣野

啲TA都係wanna be老師嚟
兩年後都係差唔多水平
一樣咁差

推一下
有冇ching一齊成篇文改

睇到actively encouraged 已經眼火爆
先唔講文法，邏輯已經有問題
唔通有樣嘢叫passively encouraged ？

少少comments
1) To uphold the motto of our school, we ..
2) always encourage and promote the participation in charity activities by our students
3) amounts raised by each class ..

4) we truly appreciate your generous donation in this event.
5) ( Official receipts will be issued for donations of $100 or more )

grammarly都唔識用

對呀！Government可以用單或雙, School唔知, 我見到啲權威字典只當單, 我小時候當晒佢哋全部係 It, 所以當係單, It has, It is

啲教師入職三萬幾年年跳point就係咁嘅質素？

Dear parents

We are pleased to inform you that we have successfully raised HK$3407.00 in total on the community chest causal day this year. The amount raised for each class can be found in the attached page for your easy reference.

To uphold our motto, As always, we encourage our students to participate in charity.

Please be informed that a donation receipt will be issued to the donor unless it's donation exceed $100 or more. Should you have any inquiries, please contact Ms. Xxx.

都係嘅，不過佢school咗好多次，平時都好少見人咁寫

edu grad dse eng 3 ja u asshole